Very cute story so far. I like how Ichigo gets riled up so easily. Hope you continue :)

Pleaaase continue this, I love it! It's really nice to read and not as serious as most IchiRuki storys are... And it's funny, too! So please go on with it you made my day a whole lot better!

I cannot wait for this story, I usually don't like online chatting stories because they don't stay in character well. But I can't wait for the story I really enjoyed it and I hope you update quickly.

Hello author,

Unfortunately, your story violates section six of the content guidelines as it is written in chat/script format

1. Non-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc.
2. One or two liners.
3. MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story.
4. Stories with non-historical and non-fictional characters: actors, musicians, and etc.
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.
6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.

I would suggest finding a way to write this where there is narration that takes place in a third or first-person perspective of either Ichigo or Rukia. That way, maybe there can be more insight into the character's thoughts, and you can also bypass the chat/script rule by writing something like "..." Ichigo typed. You could even alternate between characters. It might add a lot more flavour to your story if it's fleshed out this way too. It has potential so it would be a shame to risk a story over this.

Hope you decide to fix this.

W. Symphony
-Member of Critics United-

Please continue your story most the time you find stories about Bleach characters online chatting it doesn't fit the characters very well but you did a really good job in capturing them. so Please don't stop with the story I would love to read more

I would like to keep reading, so please... I will be expecting updates ;)

I enjoyed this chapters so I hope you continue this story.
I'll be waiting for the next update )

I thought it was great. Please continue!

You should definitely continue! :D The idea behind it is not ordinary and I like that really much :D

Yeah pls continue this for it a fresh idea and fyn to read too

Well, I like it enough! Please continue!