bruh...

nevermind it was destiny for R4 to die

heh R4 survives because Obi-wan hates flying

Well we are waiting for three years for the update mate

Good job, though I was hoping for more of a change

Excellent job

Excellent

Nice

Excellent job, but where was Obi?

K

I'm going to be blunt here and you may not like it, though I do hope you think about it.

Your three star wars fanfictions have been nothing more than a repeat of the movies, it could almost be considered plagiarism, and that is no small matter. Sure, small things here and there might be different, but those thing are small matters that are comparable to changing what type of socks the main character chose to wear on a random day, they have no change to the outcome at all, like when you summarize the original movies and this one, you just need to replace the nane of the protagonist with a vauge discription such as this man or that boy, and it would look no differently.

I do know that when you write a fanfiction, things tend to go that way, especially when you have no idea on how to actually write the story while still keeping the personalities of cannon characters intact, keeping tabs on lore, making things seem logical, it becomes overwhelming and you tend to take the easy way out, which would be to copy a majority of the original events, too true if it's your first fanfic. I've had such problems too, so I know. A advice is read more books or fanfics, good ones, actively, meaning taking in how those authors position the events that tends to help, alot.

Though I could be wrong, and have falsely assumes it all, if that is the case I offer my sincere apologies.

Melaena will die in childbirth, Jason will be at her side when it happens and Jason will be very saddened by it with Padme to comfort him as she had lost her dear friend and sister in law. Jason's nephew and niece, he wanted to raise them as did Padme but it was too much of a risk as Jason and Padme are wanted people by the newly formed Galactic Empire which is not the right environment to raise children at. The girl was to be taken to by Senator Organa and his wife, she will be well cared and loved with them. The boy will be taken to Tatooine where the Lars raise him under Obi-Wan's vision. Jason could not raise his sister's children but what he could do was fight to make the galaxy a safer place for them. Jason and Padme worked carefully over the years to form a rebellion against the Empire, Jason had the military experience and leadership traits while Padme had the charismatic voice and talent for politics and she is a very strong voice in the Senate. Jason is still in touch with Ahsoka and various groups who would rebel against Imperial authority and Padme had powerful friends in the Senate and in a position to ask favors. Jason is the military leader of rebellion but Padme is the political leader.

PLEASE DON'T KILL MELAENA!

What movie ?

Very good rewriting of the Star Wars prequels. Just a proposal, but could you do a scene with Jason and Padmé I'm just not the only one but I (or we) wondered what their lives as a married couple.