Reviews for Broken Mirror |
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Guest chapter 8 . 3/8 Uay |
Guest chapter 8 . 2/13 Please just continue! |
Tommy chapter 8 . 2/7 I NEED MORE! |
Deku Momiya chapter 8 . 5/12/2019 Hey. Are you going to continue this? It's pretty nice |
DarkManta chapter 8 . 3/3/2019 so sweeet. Please update soon |
Eramis8 chapter 8 . 2/24/2019 Ah spontaneous revival! |
CaptainRyano chapter 8 . 2/20/2019 Yes! We back, baby! Let the fluff continue |
Ouroborosdragon chapter 2 . 2/19/2019 I was going to give this story a shot because of a good first chapter; I don't typically give whiteknight stories a chance since the ship has a very bad first impressions on me but I was done as soon as the whole fake relationship between Jaune and Pyrrha happened just to get Weiss jealous, way to make Jaune an emotionally Manipulative asshole. He's also unknowingly hurting Pyrrha by getting her hopes up and stringing her feelings of him along like the dumb fuck he is. It would have been so much better if the relationship between Jaune and pyrrha was genuine just to have her die and leave him devastated and be full of hatred for cinder leading him down the dark path of revenge like sasuke uchiha from Naruto. With Weiss being the one to slowly bring Jaune out of the darkness and actually fall in love him; now that she's more mature and understands her feelings better now. That would of been a slow burn whiteknight story I would actually enjoy and support but nope. |
Misslieness chapter 8 . 2/18/2019 Welcome back! Some great developments here. |
Flare Dart chapter 8 . 2/18/2019 Annnnd can you feel the love tonight!~ NOW I HAVE THE SONG STUCK IN MY HEAD |
Shad0wReaper133 chapter 8 . 2/18/2019 Weiss needed *a hug at that point. - The FFnet uploader likes deleting spaces after italicized words, so you should keep your eye out for it in the future. "I…I understand the sentiment."* - Needs a quotation mark at the end even if they keep talking, otherwise their sentence shouldn't be unnecessarily split up. |
TeQWo CoNViX chapter 8 . 2/18/2019 Oh yes Weiss. Oh yes! Thanks for updating. More. ;) |
Celestia's Paladin chapter 8 . 2/18/2019 Weiss you are falling hard. Angst and hugs, so much angst and hugs. |
Guest chapter 7 . 12/16/2018 Can you plz continue |
xFallenDemonx chapter 7 . 10/29/2017 Great chapter! I'm glad that Jaune was the first person that Weiss was reunited with. It was nice seeing them share a moment together. I can't wait to see Ruby's reaction. Also, keep up the good work! :) |