Now that was one of must beautiful hp fanfic I ever read. Truly amazing. Subarashii

Hello. You should go through chapter 1 and fix some of the spelling errors. Still, you are probably one of the top reviewed fanfics on this site so keep it up.

In response to your words on Trump, I will simply say that at least you know what you're getting with him. Sure, he has a lot of faults. But he's at least open about the fact that he has them. Not to mention, he never was a politician before this, which means he's not a member of said inner circle of absolute corruption. When you toss in his opponent, a career politician who has done nothing but play politics their entire life, one can hardly be blamed for going for Trump. Even with all his faults, at least he feels human.

I liked the way he was acting a gasp of fresh air

Well, since they were being honest... "Strangulation."
The technical term for this would be Asphyxiation which of course could be bounced into a pun as well as keeping up with Harry’s rather informed vocabulary

What a chapter! Man how is Sirius gonna be free now?

Seems Harry's character traits have been completely changed. Which makes it difficult to relate with his character and this story. Main lead character should not have been tempered with to this extent in a "fan-fiction"!

I love grumpy Harry lol

hell.. it has been proved by genetic testing that 30% of children are NOT being raised by their biological father ... I guess that marital fidelity has NEVER been as .. honest as women proclaimed themselves to be... :P

So I have somehow managed to read all of your stories completely by accident, and, not only that, but in complete reverse order too . I love the work you've done so far and I look forward to future chapters. If you need another beta, just let me know!

(In the case I've been logged out of FF Reader by my phone) -Pheonixfera

That was a Lot of Fun!
Thank you :)

Wow... talk about extremes... babies and blood-curses.

That was some damn good pron! Be proud of it!

I realise that this story was published long ago and any new reviews are basically pointless, but I'm going to post one anyway for the peace of my mind. Harry's character has almost no personality so far, other than being an overall asshole. There is nothing about him that makes me feel "yes, please let him succeed." His continued disregard for ALL rules, care for mankind and looking down on anyone who does follow rules or care for others is getting old at this point. Simply put, I wouldn't care if the next chapter started with "Harry is dead, Sirius is the protagonist now."

I will read a couple more chapters, just in case things do change; but I don't have much of a hope for the story.

I had this odd thought, a couple of times now actually, which was essentially 'he killed off Hermione to subsume the dedicated researcher role into Ravenclaw!Harry...'
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"All the books about everything, fiction and non-fiction, textbooks and novels, mundane and magical. If it was written down, then I want it. At least three copies of each if possible."
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... and now you've proved it :D

The scene with the unicorns reminded me of Hagrid, thinking that he might have had a wonderful retirement on Spellhaven. Then I realized that he - and most other giants - is dead. Kinda trippy.

What about a sausage patty? The idea of the leavings from killing room floors masticated and "seasoned", then compressed into a 'disc' is all the proof of Tzeentch's influence on humanity that I will ever need.