So Alex has no qualms about killing random people for conveniece but is now bending over backwards to play hero for girl across the street? Aight

It’s a shame this died, I love the story, it was so well written and constructed.

honestly they could probably still have sex just with each other. they would just make all the biology necessary

okay it's kind of weird that they don't freak out over the fact that he can steal powers. I know dragon is basically an AI or whatever I think but armsmaster is still human

*telekinetic and technically it would be tactile telekinesis. that's a lot of ts lol

If this did/does become adopted, you’ll let us know?

Why would he want to work a regular job?

Loved it. Kinda wish it was more graphic and made personal. Sounds fucked up but I wanted an emotional, mental and physical Torture scean.

Hmhmghmhmhmhmhm

I like this story and I'd prefer if the powers don't deteriorate cause let's be honest we came to this story to read alex being overpowered what's the point of making him less op?

Has anyone adopted yet?

hahahaah typical worm fanfiction; even when it makes no fucking sense the MC MUST help Dragon break it's restrictions, oh no best robot waifu is unhappy so even enemy MC MUST help robot waifu.

So fucking stupid. So fucking what the PRT might find out about Earth-Prototype? They already fucking KNOW he's a sentient bioweapon that could cause a massive outbreak. They'd be no actual fucking difference if they knew his history. They'd be nothing more they could actually do, they couldn't send everyone possible against him cuz a) to many heroes would die b) couldn't leave other cities unprotected c) it might not actually work d) it would go against Cauldron's anti-Scion plan.

But no, Dragon MUST be helped. At all costs. Against all reason.

So the reason blacklight cared whatsoever in the first place about how Taylor became a Cape is basically all an excuse for you to write the scenario where he beats up her bullies. Not because it's in character. Or it's actually relevant to his goals, whatever they may be except for 'get money and fight strong guys'... Heck, it even had zero to do with those 2 objectives. And I rly like how there's apparently a new no killing rule, but it only applies to glory girl. Everyone else? The completely innocent store manager just doing his job right. Free pickings and Dana is totally chill with that. So long as it isn't glory girl. That is assuming he was actually serious when suggesting killing blows on the wards and not just saying that because u could afford to let him say that knowing you weren't actually going to write him doing that because of the undersiders saying no. Just so he could get more money. Heck of a lot of plot convenience to allow glory girl to continue living. Despite the fact that it would in fact be far more logical to kill her the first time around. Who would know? Who would tell? Who would identify him? Who would realise she was even dead until she was missing for so long they had no other choice but to assume so? It's not like he would leave any evidence behind of her being there. The only the only thing they would have to go off is that she had a patrol in the area. Nothing would point to him specifically.

Fascinating premise. Exciting mix. Really piqued curiosity with how they even got to be in the world in the first place. Looking forward to how Alex would interact with the mechanics and local powers of earth bet. Everything else so fat? Lazy writing, wish fulfilment disregarding realistic characterization (as real as can be for a completely fictional character) and a fear of actually killing anyone Canon important because it would utterly derail future Canon. Obviously the story is done so this is meaningless, but in any future story u write I hope u can avoid the pitfalls of fearing to derail Canon, preventing the death of important characters due to plot armour that breaks any immersion in the story, and just twisting the personality and characterization of an already established character to suit whatever wishful narrative u want to build despite it having no true relevance or reasonable justification. I hope u continue to write and doing what u want and just take this advice. Oh well. Just fanfiction so none of this truly matters anyway. Do and write whatever u want as long as ur happy with it.

Nevermind that prior review

Don't remember if I missed something, but what happened to Coil? BB can't be free of villains if he's still there...