I know this hasn't been updated in awhile but I have faith. Also I am really interested to know if winter will become a maiden but it would also be cool if she became a rider

Okay, that was freaking awesome. The writing was so well done and the plot is so freakin interesting man. Incorporating the four horsemen? Genius! I love it!

Huh... thiswill be fun. o.o

Background works...

Okay, I don't usually deal with this ship, but this is interesting. *mozeys on forward*

I swear, this is exactly like a Qrowin comic I've seen on D.A...where Glynda wonders about Winter being the winter maiden, along with Ironwood, but Qrow denounces it as a bad idea, and Ironwood asks him if it's cause of his past feelings for her, and he goes on dark and says Jimmy EXACTLY like the way he did in this Fanfic...either way, GG! Can't wait for more updates...

I like the way your combining The Four horsemen of the apocalypse of Christian beliefs with the old Norse Legends(I think its originally Norse) of the wild hunt. It's very creative and seems very fittign in the RWBY universe. You also have the character spot on as far as potrayal goes and your wirting style is well executed. I hope to see you continue this and update soon

JUST A SUGGESTION : Famine can't take away life that is Death's job he should take away Arua and energy
Death well kills by touch
Pestilence can send out swarms of LIKE zombie bugs to attack
And War can summon weapons and control them like Penny

You should have the names be
War
Famine
Plague
And Death

I hope this continues soon. a decent set-up and plot.

Really? Wild Hunt? Just had to make an organization. Why not only the Four Horsemen?

A very interesting story. The characters are not OOC and the OCs aren't cheesy. Great plot so far. Please keep making chapters!

Please update soon! I want to read more of this story! OwO

This is soooo good please update soon!

pleeaaaassseeee update this soon