It was an amazing story! Really! more...I'll be happy them

and let's not forget about that byakugan too lmao

that moment was triggering me. it's not byakugan,unless u following boruto anime and already know the real name of it

the main reason i don't like that dojutsu is becuz of how that eye can make boruto OP so fuckin' fast that makes me want to growl,bark and growl in protest like a doggo.. but luckily,u call it byakugan instead of jougan

GAAAAHHHHH DX

actually,this is the 1st time i read something else besides yaoi/shonen ai sasunaru.
and i think maybe that's why the depth of the brotherly-love relationship of sasuke and naruto was catching me off guard! i mean like...YOOOOOOooo,the feels in the chapter 2 bruuh(,that chapter is my fav!)! although the married couple in here is naruhina,i can't help but almost crying with how protective sasuke can be as naruto's older brother untill the end of the story. it fit him so well obviously thanks to kishimoto for make indra as sasuke's reincarnation... and with how short the story is,it doesn't satisfied me:'v

naruto playing 'play dead' on sasuke had me burst laughing and in tears at the same time btw... i wish SP/BORUTO NNG anime will give sasuke and naruto more time screen and make something adorable and rare like this TwT"

anyway,boruto's thought about calling him stony face instead of (uncle) sasuke almost all the time had me dead XD

and that moment when sasuke and sakura keep insulting naruto an idiot tooXD man... i miss the good ol' team7

Lol when naruto's ill is getting worse,my reaction at that moment is so unusual XD becuz i'm used to be worried at naruto when he's dying,broken down or he's been attacked & no 1 cares about him...while in this fanfic,i'm almost can't stop laughing becuz it will be so nonsense asf if he died from running out of chakra XDXD & yet,every brotherly moments of naruto & sasuke always makes me awe...i mean,u don't know how RARE it was to see that kind of moment in these TvT

I like this quite a bit, but there's something that really bothers me about this story. Your writing POV (point of view) is not obvious, and it should be. It doesn't make it significantly harder to read, but it does make it a little annoying. From what I can tell, this is suppose to be a story written in 3rd person. The problem is when referring to Boruto's parents you often say things like "Boruto wanted Dad to be here more." The problem with that line is, there's no "his" in front of dad. There needs to be a word that shows possession. Without it, it makes it sound like Naruto is everyone's dad, including the reader's. Another thing is, (this only happened once, and wasn't reoccurring like the dad thing) at one point your story randomly changed to first person POV. I couldn't tell if that was because it was suppose to be a thought, but if it is, you should italicize it then. I really recommend fixing these things. It'd make this so much easier and better to read. Feel free to dm me if English isn't your first language, and you're unsure of some things. Good story.

This looks like an interesting story, there can't be enough stories about Naruto and Boruto's relationship.

Esto se esta encaminando a ser una gran historia! Me esta gustando mucho, es lo que siempre quise leer después de ver la dinámica con Bolt

love the story

as promised, a review after reading it!
loved how you ended it. just enough action and the end was really sweet. had a feeling who cat was earlier and glad to know who it was when confirmed xD
the uzumaki family is so adorably portrayed. thank you for this chapter!

Ah, fuck. You just had to mention Jiraiya, didn't you? I wasn't aware you could sweat through your eyes.

I love it...keep up the good work _

yay you updated! i will read it once im home. ive been waiting for an update since october and im so glad it is here finally... thank you so much! i will leave another review once ive read the last chapter :)

Yay! Loved it! You made me cry. You certainly captured the feeling of losing your father well. I lost mine in October, and I can tell you that you portrayed how it feels very well.
I'm so glad he didn't actually die, and I love the way you ended the story. Great job!

You haven't updated this in a while. Are you okay? So, this is a really good story and you left it on a cliffhanger... Are you going to update this?

I love this story! Please update soon!