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Yoooooo! I love how Bianca wants to make a grant entrance, I already want to see what the reactions will be. Dudeee, I can hear B's voice as I'm reading this, it's so amazing that you can capture so much of her just within the first few paragraphs of this chapter!

DANIKAAA! Omg I'm so excited to get to know more about her! You can already tell how much B cares about Danika, I love their relationship already 3

B'S FRIENDS WITH TRACY?! Oh shit, I sure didn't see that one coming! Oooh, now I'm wondering how B's gonna take the whole Tracy/Theo/Dread Doctor thing further in the season (that is, if you're going with that!)

theo: I SEE YOU VILLAIN! lmao he probably took that lighter off a dead guy's body or something.

Bianca and Stiles arguing is cracking me up. She's going to be soooo pissed when she figures out what's going on! The secrets are bound to be spilled, this isn't going to end well :o

Omg I'm so nervous about B reuniting with her dad! There's so much tension between them already :c I love learning about the type of relationship she had with Claudia, please tell me we're getting flashbacks in the future! :D

Def a good choice that you spill up the first chapter, it was such a good set up for the rest of the story! Can't wait to see what sort of trouble B gets herself into ;D

Oh man, that ending. . . ;; But first, I liked the back and forth between Bianca and Theo - they don't necessarily have chemistry yet, but Theo's interest in her is so casual and simple, I wonder how he'll react to finding out what changed her was the loss of her mother.

I also wonder, when you mention that she resembles her mother more and more every day, how that feels to Stiles after so long apart. Does he see his mother in his sister now too? Or rather. . . does he see the woman who killed herself to get away from him?

(To be fair, I didn't finish the last part of season five or season six yet but. . . )

I also can totally see Bianca finding out Theo's a werewolf and trying to keep it a secret from Stiles while Stiles is trying to keep it from her lolol

God, your Malia is on point, you do her so much justice. Bianca is also fantastic, and I like the way she interacts with Stiles - they have a nice, dramatic tension, and I can't wait for her to meet Theo.

(Though I would not mind Malia x Bianca either tbh)

Your actual writing voice is really solid as well? It has a mature elegance - doesn't dwell too much on how much of a bad girl Bianca is, but doesn't shy away from telling us what's going on either. It's a nice balance that leaves room for showing us what's what later on down the line and then hitting us right in the feels when it does.

I look forward to her reunion with Lydia as well. . . .

Can I just say that I completely love you have more of Tracy in this? I honestly don't know why I love Tracy so much but I do and I cannot wait to read more about her and also Danika! They seem like some awesome friends for Bianca. That being said it was amazing to read about Bianca meeting Theo of course. I love how nonchalant she was toward him, and then that attitude yas girl I can already feel the sexual tension. I also adore how Stiles wants to protect her but she totally shuts him down and reminds him that she's more than able to take care of herself.

Okay. I was finally able to finish reading this and I just have to say that I loved it! Bianca is so sassy and quick-witted. I love hearing her responses to everything and I love how confident she is. I can tell she's going to be a strong female character. Her banter with Stiles was so funny, though. I was practically laughing throughout the whole chapter. I really liked seeing her interact with the canon characters and I'm definitely looking forward to seeing how her first meeting with Theo goes. Like, does she remember him from school or is it going to be kind of like starting fresh? I also loved the jest about her initials. "My nickname is 'B' moron." "Stands for bitch if I'm not mistaken." I seriously love their sibling rivalry and can't wait to learn more about their relationship. Also, the meeting between her and Malia was funny and very true to Malia's character. And, does that mean that B is bisexual? I'm just curious, but I would totally approve if she was or wasn't. I just loved all of her little jokes about her being the better Stilinski. And like I said before, I am very excited to see exactly how she fits into the TW universe b/c I don't think she has any idea about the supernatural side of Beacon Hills and I can just imagine her getting a little freaked out at first and then totally embracing it. I'm also interested in all of the different relationships she'll have with the canon characters. I'm gonna try to keep reading this asap, my friend, b/c I am loving Bianca so far. You're doing a great job, though! I can tell you put a lot of hard work into this and I'm telling you it was very appreciated on my end! I can't wait to read more! Love you!

I'm so glad you split the chapters because this was literally perfect on its own!
I loved every moment of it! Her reunion with Lydia was so adorable, I wonder if she'll notice a change in Lydia, how she's not so snobbish anymore and showing off her smarts. Now, HELLO DANIKIA, we need to know more about her! Tell me we'll learn more about her, and I'm so glad B already has a friend by her side because I know she'll feel lonely at times with the pack business going on. And she's friends with Tracey? Ohhhhhhhhnooooooooooooooo. This is going to get messy. I swear if the three of them join Theo! Speaking of...STAY AWAY FROM HER THEO, SHE CAN SMELL YOUR BULLSHIT FROM A MILE AWAY. And don't lie, I know B was flirting with him by teasing him, he loves that shit, it gives him a half chub.
The argument between Stiles and Bianca was actually surprisingly painful, perhaps because I could envision it so well with your writing. Bianca is more on the aggressive side while it seems like Stiles knows really well how to push her buttons, he can antagonize her without really trying. I hope as the story goes on, they can learn to trust each other, because clearly its lacking (mostly because of Stiles, pack business and all)
Her reunion with John (NOT NOAH FUCK THAT) was as awkward and stiff as I imagined. I'm surprised Jon allowed her to come back to Beacon Hills, because like Stiles pointed out, shit isn't safe here. But i'm guessing he missed her too much and can't leave the shit hole town.
This chapter was great dude, you should be proud of yourself, I know how much time and dedication is spent on each one. And i'm honored you even ask for my opinion at times, like what? You know what you're doing and you're kicking ass! Can't wait for the next update :D

Ahh this was awesome! I love Bianca already and her dynamic with Stiles is A. Danika is such a doll already! And Bianca and Theo ahhh I can't wait for more of them!

Bianca's so sassy hahahahaha can't wait until she meets Theo and drags him

Love the story.

It wouldn't let me log in and review because I "already reviewed" BUT IT ME. This is such an amazing beginning omg. I love Bianca, she's so sassy. Her being better with girls than Stiles HA not untrue! The sass between her and Stiles is just perfect, they really do feel like bickering twins and I am so HERE FOR IT. Honestly this is such a strong start, I'm really feeling Bianca's character and I can't wait to see what she brings to the story. Congrats on rewriting it is such a difficult thing to do and I cannot wait to see what this amazing story brings.

Ahhhh I love the start to this already! Bianca is such a babe and I love her dynamic with Stiles so much. The way they just quickly fell back into their old banter despite the fact that she was annoyed at him honestly felt very natural, like real siblings who get mad but can't stay mad for too long. They're so presh! Also Scott blessss I love how easy he seems around Bianca too, like you can instantly tell that she grew up with the boys and feels comfortable around them even though she's been away for a while. And poor puppy Liam! Bless! I can definitely see some fun interaction potential with the two of them for sure, with him being very intimidated by her :P Also loved the whole Malia introduction and Bianca casually hitting on her in front of Stiles. Poor boy can't catch a break :P Overall this was a very sold opening chapter, definitely had me hooked and gave me some great insight into Bianca's character already. I can't wait to see her interacting with the pack more, and especially keen for Theo soon hehehe. But anyway yay great job I am so excited for this fic and everything you have planned for Bianca!

Ooooh I love it. This has so much potential. I'm excited to see where it goes! And B is hilarious and sassy. Please continue!

YES I AM SO READY FOR THIS!
I love the dynamic between the twins honestly, and poor Scott trying to keep the peace he is too good for this world. I'm also v invested in what Bianca and Malia's relationship will be in the future...

i'm too lazy to sign in buttt ANYWAYS

WOO WHOOO LOOK GIRL IT'S YOUR FIRST CHAPTER! LOOK AT YOU GO! :D

I'm so proud of you hon! Bianca is def bitchy and i love every moment of it /evil cackle/