| Reviews for Snippets from the Aboveground |
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   Akittenwithgloves chapter 2 . 7/4/2018 this gives me life, thank you for writing this. |
| Fall chapter 19 . 6/20/2018 Yes! This was a great story! |
| Kat Robins chapter 9 . 4/13/2018 Why did you have to write this?! I can understand having an opinion, as confused, twisted, and warped as it is, but why did you have to write it down here?! I skipped over the chapter of Papyrus and Mettaton, not bothered enough to write about it, but this is ridiculous! All of these anti-heterosexual views are nothing more than confused minds and empty excuses. Just because two girls love each other does not mean that they are gay, or whatever the term is. If a woman does not like men, she does not have to go and marry another woman. Same for men. There is such a thing as sibling love, family love, or deep endearing affection. It does not mean that such couples need to date, marry, or even...(thinks of a proper, family-friendly word)...make love (Seriously, why is that phrase even around?). There really is no benefit to such actions. But the world is so twisted and poisoned, many people think it is okay to jump off this 'high cliff'. And the transgender thing, though effective on the outside, will never change who one is on the inside. Once that gender, always that gender, down to the last strand of DNA. All this causes is pain, isolation, ostracization, and more confusion. And before anyone talks about animals doing it, it has been documented that animals do an action similar to it as a show of dominance, a pecking order. Animals communicate more through body language since they have no real concept of vocal language like we do. But, I could be wrong, and the animals are just as confused as humans in this sinful world. As for this story...it is a shame. I wanted to sit back and enjoy a good read, and your earlier work gave such promise. Well, for what it is worth, I fare you well. |
| Kat Robins chapter 1 . 4/12/2018 *stops, looks around* Wait...The story isn't over? *smirks* Awesome! And things look promising...I am just bracing for the inevitable 'boom' to be lowered. Once that is done, all that is left is to endure and enjoy the ride out! |
| karlaostojic7 chapter 8 . 2/27/2018 I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT WAS MEGALOVANIA HA HA! |
| TyJupiter chapter 9 . 2/26/2018 "How do I be a lesbian?" I have officially died of laughter |
| NightshadeLG chapter 11 . 11/1/2017 What was the revenge plan? |
| NightshadeLG chapter 15 . 10/30/2017 MLP HA BEST STORY EVER |
| NightshadeLG chapter 9 . 10/30/2017 You or Undyne? ...Yes. BEST ANSWER EVER |
| Mernom chapter 19 . 10/15/2017 Somewhat interesting... But it's also kinda selfish. She undid 75 years of progress... Some of it might not repeat again due to randomness. Then again, it might save some lives due to residential memories... Oh well. Next story we go! |
| Mernom chapter 17 . 10/15/2017 Sans' and Frisk's speech pattern is kinda funny. Reminds me of Monster Kid... What happened to that guy, anyway? |
| Mernom chapter 13 . 10/15/2017 Those hints are heavy... |
| Mernom chapter 10 . 10/15/2017 Pranks all the way to hell! XD |
| Mernom chapter 8 . 10/15/2017 Playing Megalovania would probably be difficult with only two arms, since it has some simultaneous tones. Would probably require using magic to press on more keys at once. |
| Mernom chapter 6 . 10/15/2017 So Frisk dressed up as a skeleton for Halloween? It's not particularly clear at the beginning of the chapter. |
