they stipl have the grey streak ill moa so it was correct

I'm just going to pretend that Hades yeets back up to the land of the living because I can't handle to feels.

Piper
Everyone acts like she's so powerful but we never actually see it.

This was so sad that I loved it. I love your writing

This is the saddest thing I have ever read

I get its stereotype popular girl, but it felt almost unpleasant to read. The pacing of the writing itself is very quick, not in a good way, and some things just feel too abrupt. Like percy shouting out he won't be Cassidy's bf.

I absolutely love it, but can you please please please do one where someone falls in love with like piper or someone? Like do the same kind of story you did here but make piper the one here instead? PLEASE? i think i'm getting sick of everyone falling for Annabeth... it is a REALLY popular version!

I like percabeth chapters The most and jasper The least because first of all: Jason is dead, and second of all: they where never a interesting couple

Annabeth said that The Grey was gone from theyre hair in The mark of Athena

haha hello fellow marching band kid

I can't stop the tears!

I like this, especially this last chapter. I really like Leo in general, but his more serious side underneath has always intrigued me. I like how you've shown that. Great job with this.

I know you named him after Bob the Titan, but imagine a 14 year old called Bob somehow not get bullied. No offense, but when I think of the name Bob, I don’t actually see it as a name that people name kids, I just think of Spongebob.

dude..i started frickn crying! my sister just came in my room and said, "ur reading a book..arent you. Ugh..sisters!"
lol
but it was good

Jason was the first to die. It was way to soon. He died a hero and is definitely in Elysium