Ha... LOL That's what I'm always thinking when I'm writing fanfic "I know where I want it to end up. I just don't know the next step."

Keep it up.. it's a REALLY good story.

you want to do the genocide run *again*?
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you're really kind of a freak, huh?

GRAvITY SHIFTS AND THEY FLY THROUGH the doorway on the other side of the room. hahahaha. genuine laughter. just... wow. need more bloopers and hilarious omakes like that, we really do.

This was a good story. I like how you capture the essence of the genocide run, which is, "Just because you can do it, you have to do it," as sans says. The genocide run is a satire, and most people just don't see that. Again, great story.

Dude, this story is awesome...
That's really all I have to say, but I hope it made your day.

This is a fantastic take on the genocide run. I love it.
Also,Sans desktop buddy? Where do I get one of these?

I'm so happy you're continuing this. The way you write sans thought process is perfect and just.. yes.

I should have known better than to expect the ending staying happy, but this story is so good that I forgive you :)

I really love this fic. You write sans a little more serious than I'm used to, but it's a welcome change :) keep up the good work

I'm pretty interested in this story! Can't wait to read more! :D

This is an interesting outlook on Sans, but I'd really like to think that puns are sorta his things. Or maybe they are a produce from his laziness/depression. Who knows? I'm interested to see where this will go.