Marko burned down their store that's awesome and they did deserve it from his point of view. So I'm guessing with the way that this ends there's a sequel, the ending doesn't feel complete so there must be, maybe? So, then I'm off to find and read it (well I am tomorrow) if you've written it anyways thanks for writing this!

I'm not sure that the chapter title of cuddling was meant to be a joke or not though I suppose David did cuddle with him at the end... and Marko cuddled with Thron on the couch so maybe it could be accurate.

More entertaining talking between Marko and Michael, you write them good together maybe once Michael stops being so brooding they'll be good friends. Glad that Michael didn't manage to drag out his half-vampire status this time.

I enjoyed the interaction between Marko and Michael in this chapter. Thron lives too and is David's hellhound that's cool :)

Yay Marko's alive (sort of)! He's my favorite of the boys so I'm happy that he survived. I wonder how he's going to take the news about Paul and Dwyane.

This is the first time I've seen much emphasis on the way that they sleep actually most Lost Boy fics gloss over or change the way that they sleep at least from what I've read.

I'm surprised that this story, in particular, has so few reviews from what I've read so far it looks like it'll be really interesting.

This story is freaking perfect! I love David's attraction and conquering of Michael. Michael's initial reaction to drinking and his whole interaction with his master. I shipped those two when I first saw the movie so this is awesome. Marko was hilarious! Hoping for sequels.

Also glad the Frogs were in here. Is it bad that I rooted for David and Marko?

ermahgerd MARKO IZ ALIVE ,U, waited to review until the end. but I like the idea of this story
Hoping to find more revenge from marko tho c:

wow. poor Edgar and Alan that is just sad for them.

Too bad this wasn't longer, it's a very good read, well done, the characters are IC in the story, i can really see David doing this to Mike.

Only saw a few inconsistencies in this from the movie:

1. Sam wouldn't e able to rationalize Mike being gone on his bike, Mike's bike would likely be in the garage or driveway, since David abducted Mike through flying.

2. Mike would have had to have another mattress, Laddie tore through the mattress at the end of the movie.

3. Marko wears a tapestry/ patch covered denim jacket, not a leather one.

Great work though, those just small details, but other wise can't see anything wrong with the story other than it ends to quickly XD.