gonna be honest

i freaking love this wish you would continue it at some point.

I wanna see the Arcs beat Ironwoods ass

Well, more crap.

How old was Jaune when this fic started?

Please continue this.

Great story, but I don't dig those cybernetic implants.

This was a good story. I can honestly say that I was waiting the entire time for Jaune to snap and lash out at Atlas, but I suppose being conditioned from age 6 or so onward can do a lot of damage to a person. Ah well, I can still daydream of Jaune, upon recovering somewhat more from his current mental state and meeting the family he could have had, bringing Atlas to it's knees by revealing what they did and threatening them.

The risk of creating the ultimate soldier is that they cannot be controlled unless they choose to be controlled.

Can't wait to see more of this from ya!

Huh. Interesting...

This was a great chapter,
Please keep up the awesome work.

You know, wouldn't Jaune be able to reattach his hand? His semblance is control over life so it wouldn't be impossible for him to do so.

I'm always going to hope you update this.

I think in my opinion that it was a mistake for you to get rid of jaune love for his family. That he broke and got brainwashed too easily. Felts like you took the last bit of what would make jaune. Jaune and now he just master cheif jaune.

The idea is sound but the bonds between iron wood jennings is too forced. Penny is okay.

I hope there is a reckoning with ironwood and the arcs with no cop out with jaune coming to ironwood defense.

Keats is better than Byron!

Also good chapter.