| Reviews for Mishap In a Bottle |
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   Torrasque666 chapter 2 . 2/12/2019 but did he knock up Pyrrha too? that's a burning question I need answers for! |
| Chimeara7 chapter 1 . 9/15/2018 Nice writing and it was fun to read through... but am I the only one even a little disturbed by the implications of this? How exactly is this concept different from drugging someone for sex? |
| Mechtogan chapter 1 . 7/6/2018 thank you Cardin! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/19/2017 I love the fact that Blake, Nora, Weiss, and Ren would even attempt to defend Jaune after potentially ruining Ruby's Huntress career for nine months. |
| Snappy Flowah chapter 2 . 2/1/2017 Super Great job! That was awesome! That ending tho... heh, I definitely need an aftermath chapter like, right now. |
| Ken Wise chapter 2 . 10/23/2016 Yang's gonna castrate Jaune's soul when she gets free. |
| Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov chapter 2 . 10/21/2016 Well, this is something you don't read every day. But boy, it was hot. Like real real real hot. Cardin helped to have two gf's that can be fun. As for the later note, that's going to be an issue for the ending, he has survived Yang. Now he has to survive Qrow and Taiyang. That might be a problem. Well. It wasn't awkward like most fics would be at the end. I got three requests on the end. Please continue this Jaune/Pyrrha/Ruby or make something new. Could you give me the name of the ship? I'd like a SunnyBees fic. I like those three. Saluut. |
| Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov chapter 1 . 10/21/2016 Okay, that is one way to pay someone back. It was a bit awkward to read about it but you make it up to some way. Ren and Nora are off and I'm guessing one of them are sharp enough know what kind of thing was going on. And that something weird is going to happen. As for the smut part, it was good. At some parts, Jaune is a bit OOC. But that's my idea. This idea is popular. Keep this shit coming. Saluut. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/6/2016 Really hope you continue this,I love it |
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/22/2016 Cute |
| edboy4926 chapter 2 . 2/21/2016 Good ending. |
| edboy4926 chapter 1 . 2/21/2016 Good intro. |
| Vospader21 chapter 1 . 2/16/2016 I'm grieving from the events of the volume 3 finale. Fanfiction like this helps, thanks. |
| jonjames427 chapter 2 . 1/25/2016 i could see a fanfiction like this be made for blake/sun/yang and weiss/flynt/neptune. and their woould also a funny coincidence with jaune have intercourse with two redheads, blake having intercourse with two blonds, and weiss having intercourse with two dark/tanned skinned guys. |
| jonjames427 chapter 1 . 1/25/2016 i can now see Cardin's family being distillers thus the drinks. |
