OMHGOD THIS WAS SO GOOD!

I remember I read this like... wow, years ago, now. In fact, I’m almost sure I’ve reviewed this before, but hey, who cares!
I fell back into Undertale for a bit, saw I had bookmarked this story because I liked it so much, and just reread it all again in one sitting. I really, really like this story. I can’t reread it as often as I’d like because my body can only hold so many tears, haha.
Anyways, I loved this back then and I still love it now. Lovely work!

Another masterpiece! Glee for your talented hands and mind.
Honestly, I don't think I can say something that the other kind reviewers haven't said. And if I were to throw all my amazed and smitten feelings here, you'll just see long ramblings about me complimenting you again—pretty much like Determined Karma's.

And girl, it's already long!

For creating this again, THANK YOU SO MUCH.
If it's not much trouble, please, please come back and make more wonders?

I really liked the concept for fic. The plot was quite interesting and heavy and it developed pretty nicely and it was a nice progression into how the story in the game leads to. The Frisk plot-line was quite confusing and you lost me at some points, I still am lost to some points. Also the parts with Chara and Frisk talking got quite confusing due to little indication of who is speaking at times. Really Really cool story you got here! Hope to see you come back to FanFiction someday!

I can't say the ending was satisfying, but damn if it wasn't an interesting ride.

Hm. Inverted SOUL? It would explain why most of Chara's expressions of emotions are negative here. Of course, he has plenty of reasons to be upset, but "stabbing Sans" didn't really have a reason. And it would explain the Genocide route murder spree. But the relationship between Chara and Asriel... Chara was certainly capable of expressing positive emotions when alive. And since Asriel is SOULless, but sure has bad and awful feelings, maybe that's just a side-effect of being dead, but "alive"?

This just made me emotional and renewed my love for fanfictions. Also, this is gonna be my new headcanon. Thank you so much for this wonderful story!

Bejeebus, this was SUCH a great story! I was hooked from word one, and while I'm partially sad it's over, reading the end left SUCH a great feeling of satisfaction! Millions of kudos to you, my dear author. You have a great talent and I'm happy to have crossed and read this story of yours. Definitively worth a 'favorite' and multiple reads!

This was a very good read. Thank you so much for this story!

Very interesting first chapter! I'm excited for the rest!

This is now my head canon. Oh my god! this was so good! Thank you for that lovely journey!

This story is amazing and it made me cry. I would love to see something more done with this story and some of the questions at the end answered.

You made a typo

This is a great chapter lot's of description on the setting and on what the character was going through in the dark and strange place

Heh, I was considering writing a Undertale prologue, but somehow I don't see how I could match your interpretation. I loved this story from beginning to end. It was really thought out, fits in brilliantly with the canon lore, and is a fitting tale of hope for redemption which works no matter how you play the game after this epilogue. I especially liked the frisk 2nd person/chara 1st person pov as it worked really well for both this story and the game itself. Personally I'm disappointed to hear you be writing another longer story after this one, you certainly have the knack. Trust me when I say I've been around this site for a long time, and I've seldom seen a better original interpretation to a story.