Wow, not a punch to the gut, but the squeeze of the heart.
And salt in my eyes

wahh this is so sad ;-; If luffy dies in the actual series like this then i swear-

Omg ouch why!? I'm crying this was beautiful. Seriously I don't always like the way people write death scenes but this was so perfect. Instant fav, even if I die a little inside each time I read it.

you just trampeled on my heart, played pinata with my soul and drowned my mind in the salty liquid of tears and blood. But I'm still smiling right now... with tears streaming down my face.

thank you. You pictured them so well.
It's all I can say.

Thank you!

Cried like a f cking toddler, thanks for that anyway

GAH! *huge disgusting sniff*

Luuuuffffyyyyyyyyy. Why? Don't leave you nakama.

We won't "See you around" until we die too! *wails into pillow and curses human emotions*

You will always be the king of pirates in my mind! I'll forever follow your dream! I shall meet you in *sniff* heaven with news of the crew's safety and happiness!

Rock on, Monkey D Luffy! Soar ever higher! Your body might have left, but your soul lives on in every being with an itch for adventure, or love for and of a nakama!

Author-san, I cried. I truly did.

Stay flame-free and dry. Bye-bye! ;')

You've gotten so much better as a writer, like reading this after your first fic is really cool because I can clearly see the improvement!

And also this broke my heart how dare you. You can't just kill Luffy he's my child

*SCREAMS* So horrible and sad and ohmygod no! It's so well written and I'm dying with Luffy I can't. What do I do with these feels?

It was well done. Though i cant seem to grasp how luffy died to what you made sounds like a worthless pirate captain who had one thing going for him and it being alot of pawns. But i guess, one vs million can only go so far.

That was so good! I actually shed a few tearsThank you for writing this; I love seeing people's takes on his crew's feelings towards him and this just ugh. Amazing work

*Crying*

THIS HURTS SO MUCH. I HATE ABD LOVE YOU AT THE SAME TIME. It's BEAUTIFUL and basically all I want out of a Luffy-dies-earlier fic, but IT HURTS! Rock on!

very touching

Wow. I'm crying. I was listening to the song Disenchanted by My Chemical Romance while reading this, and it tore me up. I hope something like this never ever happens in One Piece T-T You wrote a really sad, brilliant piece, I enjoyed it a lot. I love how you described the crews' reactions, I think they were all pretty much in character. Well done! :)

Oh my god this is horrible and beautiful and so poetic. I really hope this never becomes canon, just... I want to cry now. I love your characterizations of them too, please keep wrecking me with more drabbles like this one.