You are a damn good writer hope you get back to your unfinished works for the one I have read are very good.

Oh yeah! That's exactly what Fumblemort wants to hear! NOT! Though I'm rather surprised that at this point he wouldn't rather Harry did leave England. With Harry and his sisters gone Fumblemort can go back to business as usual. Of course, that'd mean he wouldn't be able to get his hands on a lightsaber nor be able to pass it along to Snape for Vulturesnot/Riddle. And that'll never do! As it is, it's not looking too good for the DEs what with all the Jedi popping up in England now.

1-15 works for me! There's nothing on the list for me to argue with. So I hope you can get back to writing this. I do realize the REAL LIFE comes first though.

Oh so very interesting! I always hoped Harry'd have more family outside of England. I've also felt for quite some time now that Harry should get the hell out of Dodge. Fumblemort created the mess so why shouldn't he be forced to clean it up? But now that Harry's pretty much the leader of the Jedi he should work to clean out all the corruption in the ministry and put the Pure-blood Des where they belong. No more " I was Imperiuosed! " bullshit. Just three drops of truth potion and for those like Malfoy, a nice short walk through the Veil.

I'll have to give the original story a look. This story is really cool!

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

good date

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

First off, when the titles misspelled, 80% will not even give the story a look. Second those cliches, they are overwhelming, please try to trim them back.

good start

The start of this story seems to be jumping around and mixing timeline