Please make a sequel if you have the time. This was made 5 years ago so I inderstand why the characters are a bit ooc. But it is really good. I hope you make more.

Sweet. :)

Both the characters seem really OOC. Nice story anyways, good luckies with your future stories )

Well its good but you should have explained the situation of the time when they went their seperate ways after academy.
To clear what happened that time.
Because now in this erina confessed to him and that is a miracle. So you can understand what i mean..
Anyways keep it up. Nice chapter.
Thanks.

Sequel sequel sequel sequel

That as very romantic. Would have been sweeter without Soma's cold.

it's wonderful and a brilliant read I would say , in fact something I ought to learn to from you to improve my own. well, I'm just a little surprised she didn't really have any reaction when she first found out soma was her idol's son . However, well done and do continue !

Sorina Forever...
That really was sweet i loved it... was kinda too fast but it was best... im still grinning n smiling like crazy...
Hope you write sequel alr :D
THank YOu

Never put emoticons into any sorry whatsoever unless you are using it as dialogue in texts. It completely ruined the flow of your story. Second, you placed an excessive amount of "sniffs" into the story. We, as the readers, know that Soma is sick and do not need it to be repeated in every single sentence.

I really like this fanfiction. I hope I can read more of your work.

Hmm i loved the concept and all but the way Erina and Souma talked in this wasn't like them. Making change the speech patterns but overall it was a really good story

The story is great. The format should be edited though, I can read it just fine but some of the lines hurt my eyes (no offense).

Wow this is a very good one! You should totally do a sequel. I look forward to seeing more of your work!

Meh its 5/7

OK OK. I loved the story. I agree that there are not enough stories with these two. That said here comes the bad news.
First, you need to work on the character development. The whole "I LOVE YOU SOMA" came in out of no where. There was not much for us to see this and her actions seemed a little odd.
Second, now while I'm not sure if they added to the story or were distracting, the faces were different and I have never read a story that used them like you did. I'm not saying they were bad I'm just saying they were different.
Thirdly, there was some spelling and grammar mistakes that I saw. I don't remember them off the top of my head, but I'm just giving you a heads up.