| Reviews for Make This End |
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   M.S.Carol chapter 1 . 6/22 Ahhh. So wonderfully written |
| Nicoconsd chapter 24 . 11/19/2019 This was another fun adventure! :) |
| CoSmO333 chapter 24 . 7/28/2018 wonderful story thanks for sharing! |
| Puaili chapter 24 . 7/26/2018 Wasn’t sure which of your stories to write this on, but I love your writing style. All of your stories are engaging and really get into the thoughts and feelings of the characters. I hope you’re planning on continuing your incomplete stories, because I would like to read them. You really have a talent. |
| IFRITE chapter 24 . 10/2/2017 Awww, I wish there was an epilogue. Thanks for the great story! |
| Stephannie1014 chapter 24 . 9/1/2017 Excellent story! Thank you for all you put into this! |
| dianebelcher81 chapter 24 . 6/29/2017 good story |
| jeoliverio chapter 24 . 3/20/2017 This is a good story about Jasper and Bella trying to live a free life as newborns |
| orchidluv chapter 24 . 2/27/2017 The ending seems rushed but I love the nonstop excitement throughout and the way they come together |
| orchidluv chapter 16 . 2/27/2017 It's not really relevant, but I'm curious to know how they got on planes without passports. |
| orchidluv chapter 8 . 2/27/2017 I am really enjoying this! |
| HopeForDuende chapter 24 . 12/22/2016 Awwww! this was great, thanks! |
| misherukuro chapter 24 . 11/15/2016 Thanks for sharing. |
| becksie chapter 24 . 11/15/2016 That felt abrupt. I'm sure you have your reasons but the first several chapters really made me fall in love with your Bella and Jasper but the minute they got to Volterra, the second time, it felt like everything was sped up. And I loved it. But there feels like there could have been two more chapters of information that could have gone in. please don't think I'm being a big bag meanie, I swear it's not. I loved it but the end felt like a whole lot of nothing. thank you for taking the time to finish it. |
| SlytherinInToxicKat chapter 24 . 10/12/2016 this was a really good story |
