Reviews for Lock and Key
Guest chapter 11 . 7/26
another update please :(
TakuMisa2729 chapter 12 . 6/23
can you please update?
Ricky chapter 12 . 6/7
Hey.. It's already been more than a month. Can you please please pleaaaaaase update?
Sdohshi Designer chapter 12 . 5/21
Can you please please please update..? I can't wait for the next chapter
Rosa chapter 12 . 5/20
Hey! Your story is really amazing! But can you please update and complete the story? It's been a month and I really can't wait to read the next chapter. The story's amazing. You're amazing. So please update. Don't discontinue. This story is just too good. I've already read it 5 times.

Please Update
Jacky chapter 12 . 5/20
Can you please please please update..? I can't wait for the next chapter! It's already been a month. You're an awesome author. This story is really entertaining. After few days, I'll have my online classes.. so can you please update and finish the story? At least the next chapter. This is a gr8 story. Please update and don't discontinue.. Please!
Sam chapter 12 . 5/19
Hey! Are you going to update? I thought you were going to finish the story. Please don't discontinue. I can't wait for the story to get finished.

Please, if you are reading all the comments.. know that we are all waiting for your next chapter. So please do UPDATE!
JSmith chapter 12 . 5/19
Hi! I think your writing style is great and cohesive and I really appreciate your timing of your events. A lot of authors would have immediately begun a romance between Misaki and Usui which is not realistic. Here are some suggestions
Misaki would probably suffer from great PTSD, you could input things triggering her, maybe a movie that her and Usui watch. Since she's never experienced sex before she only deems it negatively, I would suggest her making some comment about it for Usui to notice.
Maybe having Usui take Misaki to therapy or a support group to meet other survivors, I think by the end of the story she when she's better she could champion for advocacy and reform.
I also think Misaki would be greatly disgusted with her body this would mean covering up, and Usui taking notice in this.
Finally I know you dont want to write a pregnancy but I think writing about a miscarriage would work great here. She could see a child and be triggered about her pregnancy that she lost, talking about it with Usui.
Also I think an Usui perspective would be great maybe when she tells him everything about the rape and what not, just his genuine reaction. Disgust at Torra and astonishment at the fact that Misaki would think he would be disgusted by her
TakuMisa2729 chapter 4 . 5/18
Can you please update..?
Rando chapter 12 . 5/15
Please update.. we're all waiting
Amy chapter 12 . 5/13
Can you please update? You said you'd update there's updates in the following weeks.. I'm sorry, I know you must be busy, but please don't discontinue this story cause it's amazing.. I really wish you would update soon. I'll be waiting. Please update!
TakuMisa2729 chapter 7 . 5/12
Where is chapter 13!? Please I can't wait any longer. I hope you continue this story and complete it. Please do NOT discontinue it. Please! I beg you... I have faith in you. I know you're going to update.. Please just make it quick I'm really waiting here...

Love you and your story

Again please update:)
Sukeruton0985 chapter 12 . 5/11
When I saw The Boy in the Striped Pajamas, I didn’t shed a tear. When I read through this fanfic, I nearly sobbed for six chapters straight.
In other words, I loved it. Your writing was very impactful to me, and I love how you’re taking the time to develop the characters and the plot. I look forward to seeing where this story goes
To Guest chapter 1 . 5/8
You haven't even read the whole story, you can't criticize it okay? Finish it and then review. For all I know, she is an awesome author. Please keep up your good work! I want chapter 13!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/8
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