Aweee this was so cuteee!

This was a beautiful story and I am glad that you took the time to write it as well as you did :)

I know you are done with the story and everything, but I just really wish you would continue. It is a very well written story. PS: I loved the ending ;D

This was great, awesome job!

I liked the first two chapters but this one confuses me a bit...the way it's written makes me feel as if there is a chapter or something missing because there is this implication that Clarke already nags and teases him but she has only been there for one night and she was quiet through most of it and then went to sleep...just feels like I missed something...

I liked the ending but I think there should be one more chapter on their life in Cuba!

Amazing! There were some grammar mistakes, but I could ignore them for how good the story was.
And you know, for a second there, I thought you were going to kill them all in Monty and Jasper's apartment. (That's probably what I would have done lol but I just love torturing my readers, especially when I'm in a bad mood XD) I must say that I liked your ending a lot more lol but I would have liked to see a small bit with them living their new life in Cuba, not just a "they lived happily ever after" moment, if you know what I mean.

Amazing story, once again. I really enjoyed reading it, so thanks _

Loved it!

Great Chapter ! The ending was beautiful :)
Bellamy and Clarke are just so cute ! I agree with you without Monty and Jasper it is not the same.
Your fiction is really good, I hope you will continue to write other stories :)

Loved this!

I'm so impressed by the whole of this story! I just wish there was even more but I did love the ending.

I like your story. Although its similar to one i have read before. The starting chapter anyway. But there are differences, and you may not have even seen the other one. Rambling now sorry.
So comments on your story. I like the characterisation, Clarke's strength to overcome things. Bellamy protecting his sister. Dax and Murphy being baddies. I like that you brought in Monty and Jasper at the end. Especially that the pressence of weed was a bonding point.
There are a few grammatical and spelling errors throughout. But its clear what is meant. "Starred" should be stared, "were" should be we're, "their" shows possession while what you mean is they're as in they are doing something. These are things everybody messes up at some point.
- a Scottish reader

Awesome! I'm glad u put monty and jasper in it I agree that it just wouldn't be right without them! Awesome story sad it's over

Well, it's over and it was beautiful! I only hoped it would have been longer :( May we meet again.

Nice Fiction !
I can't wait to read the next chapter :)