Love reading this story and I would love to keep reading. Not sure what Ao3 is though. Thanks.

I think the last time I read this fic there was only just one chapter. For whatever reason I assumed there would only ever be one. Out of nostalgia for some River x 12 I came back to this fic and was pleasantly surprised to find 2 more chapters! You have completely made my day with this wonderful story, and this time I am going to follow the story to get updates on future chapters! ;) Until next time :)

Thank you for this chapter

If I were rich, I would have this filmed.

This is beautiful! Well done. I can't wait for more.

Enjoying the story. Looking forward to more.
Just a note: There are great quick reference charts online about the proper usage of lay and lied. Check them out.

So lovely. Wants to make you cry too. Thanks

This is beautifully written. Loved the romance, the Doctor's thoughts about River and River comparing this Doctor to the other version.
I would love to see Capaldi and Kingston together again. They were so good together. Maybe in 2018. I have serious doubts about DW' s future so will be looking for something new.

Just so wonderfully written. You bring these characters to life so well, treating them so gently and reverently, that it honors the show and the actors like few stories I've read.

I look forward to reading more and am hoping for many chapters to come as we join the Doctor and River on this, their final and perhaps most exciting adventure of living together has husband and wife.

This was so beautiful. Thanks for the story.

Love is a promise... awww Nice thoughts on the Christmas episode.

Very nice! :) I enjoyed this on shot a lot. Thanks for sharing!
I hope you continue this story in a series of one shots, that would be cool!
~JFDraginFire

This is beautiful .

Ah! That was so beautiful! I loved it! You did such a great job with the dialogue and characterization and all of it was just great :)

I need more!