This story is good can’t wait for more

Great chapter.

Ooo i like how this has started.

Now Michael, there is a tree out in the world wasting away it's precious life to give you air. Now all you have to do is find that tree and apologize to it for wasting away it's valuable life for such useless mongrels like you.

I am very keen to see where this is going. I always love a good Hufflepuff Harry story.

Caught abusing the boy. Sigh Dumbledore

this is good so far cant wait to see what els you put up

Great chapter but if you can don’t Wait so long for another one. Mary

please write some more. it's good.

I really like what you have written so far! I hope you are able to find the time to continue it. It is definitely an interesting twist, giving Harry a childhood more similar to that of Tom Riddle. Your story is very well written, and has drawn me in from the very beginning. I’m intrigued to see what the flashback/dream at the start of the second chapter is all about. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

this is really good so far. I ant wait for the next chapter to come on.

Oh I nearly forgot, why Sirius kissing James?

Can you abit explaining Harry life in orphanage? And the headmistress is the matron, its confusing, for me headmistress is in the school. Your writing is good but if you can please added minor detail, you seemed rushed in here. Im expectation is high, can you fulfil it?
Thanks

If I may ask, Im abit confussed in here. Why Snape know Tom childhood? Its abit ... I dont know the right word but its weird knowing Dumbledore sharing his memori about Tom with his spy, of all people. You start it good though if you can add place name, marking different scane and dont make flashback if its not necessery. Your flashback is lacking, 'cause Dumbledore and Snape dont know Harry yet, and his Headmistress is not suitable to that, if its his matron I can understand 'cause he's living under her care. Please try to considering my opinion, thanks.

I hope he finds out about Sirius being imprisoned without a trial sooner rather then later... If I had been Sirius and that happened to me I would've went dark.

I hope he learns of his Heir/Lordships soon. Potter, Black, Peverell.

Imagine if America had a Magical Summer school? With advanced education in Magical classes no longer taught in england and also advanced Muggle classes like in science, math, politics, investments for future business owns... So that Harry would be educated in how to run and expand his family bc