That face you make when you realize your not the only one called Gunny by friends XD

I have to ask as I read this story and these chapters, I am noticing some similar themes. By any chance did you read the Age of Fire series of novels by E.E Knight? You captured the overall dragon siblings vibe of that story as well as just the basic tone of that. Just a bit happier overall!

If you like dragons and want a series of novels focusing on dragons just search Age of Fire series. This story is giving me serious vibes and you made me nostalgic for those books. This feels very much like that.

I haven’t made it past the first chapter of your story yet, I’ll admit I’m a little afraid with it being a Toothcup story, however I wanted to say the whole thing intrigues me. And It’s probably a question I will later get an answer to, but have you read the book series? And if not, Have you read Hiccup the Second and his brother Furious’s story? Well done on the writing.

I can’t wait for the sequel this was a great read

this was an amazing story. only thing I think needs changing is swapping the last two chapters so it makes sense chronologically. I know the final wasnt initially plannedI think). but after going back the the previous chapter, it flows better.

once again. well done.

Loved it. Please tell me you have a sequel in mind, even if you never publish it.

This was a fantastic story I absolutely loved reading it

Bleh. You've fallen into the most common fanfiction bad habit, having your main character walking around lecturing people. It's annoying, and misses the point that well written characters have flaws, if they don't they're dull sues.

Quick question about the elemental fury saga Are you gonna finish it

I think Heidrun hatchling would be twins in next sequel and I wonder if they inherited some their mother powers example they would able to speak Norse and etc? and I wonder if other Dragon souls can actually speak dragonese?

I honestly love how the Terrible Terrors keep the same name in both languages. Amazing story! x)

This was an amazing story! I read it twice in a row just to make sure I got everything!~

It had everything a story would need. Mystery, Romance, Adventure, Suspense, etc!~

Great one-shot, I can’t wait to see what you write next.

This was an Awesome story.

I wonder what happened with Dagur the Deranged meeting Heidrun? and Skuggi could meet Stoick, can't wait for the sequel