That was very detailed and very well written. It was a dark story, but I'm assuming that was intentional. I love how detailed your work is. Not just this story, but some of your other Harry Potter works, as well. I've read this story several times, and every time, I find a new detail to be surprised about. That last line, though... it broke my heart and made my jaw drop and turned my stomach all in one go. "There is no such spell!" I was expecting a lot of things, but that was not one of them. Good job!

OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG!

Will there be continuation to this? Because that's all I'm requesting :)

Hi
Your story seems very interesting.. I like your Sirius, Regulus. Rabastan is very evil.
Update soon please
Erodiate

It's wonderful, my love! Exactly what I wanted. Thanks for indulging me! Be sure to xpost this on LJ, we miss you over there!