"Part 2 and 3 of the prologue should be along shortly"
*1 year later...*

I'm intrigued. Please update soon

That start was amazing can't wait for more!

Very good start. I'm anxious to see where you go with the story.

Develop away. I am hooked.

Everything is great mate.

Hot damn you're good! I'm following this!

Great, I've never scene a DC Universe online take here and so far you've caught my attention.

I never actually played the Online Universe, I watched the cinematics and know of the story, this should be fun.

Sorry but I have to ask since I am a shipper, even though it feels clear. But still...are there any pairings?

Great start...keep going

Welcome. Interesting start. Haven't seen the online universe here before. Looks to be a original story, which is extremely rare and always welcome, even with Amazon's Attack as a part of it. Because lets face it, that was just...awful. I'm also guessing the JL/JLU TV Show has some play as well.

This was excellent start, I'm looking for what's to come .