This is really hot but there wasn't enough detail about their bodies. I do like though how you wrote Rey having pubic hair.

That epilogue. Is this what I think it means...? Because here I was thinking this was going to be the end to this storyline and I'd get terribly emotional because I'd grown attached to reading a chapter each week! But a sequel, right? Because yes! I'm not ready to say goodbye to this story and the dynamic you created! Seriously, the progression of this story from the beginning to end was absolutely beautiful and so enjoyable to read and follow! You've made me love the reyva ship even more and oh gosh you've done such a fantastic job! everything came together so well with this chapter and the last (which I couldn't get around to reviewing for I apologize!) with Jess getting a new x-wing and a new droid (r.i.p. Lucks) and being a complete nervous wreck in front of the General Organa and Rey coming back to that sweet reunion but then after finding Jess and both of them being cute like,

"Beautiful" and then "you know very well I wasn't talking about the x-wing"

It's little moments like these that get me and god I love them so much! (Also that line "can I kiss you?" line by Jess got me again - good placement there haha)

You did such a good job with this story - I just can't stress that enough. Thank you so much for the wonderful read and I look forward to seeing your future works. :)

"It's a sunrise, Jess, no one can tell you when to stop admiring it."

I love how you brought that back at the end. The way Jess and Rey's relationship developed in this fic was amazing. The plot was stunning. I really felt for the characters. The characters themselves were great as well. You wrote them with just the right amount of humor and seriousness that made me really empathize with them.

Aw this is so sweet

Great chapter extremely detailed

"You have trained to win. I have trained to survive."

I thought that line was brilliant for Rey to say. Absolutely brilliant. And the fight scene was so good! And Rey with a dual bladed lightsaber! Everything I want! Is in this story I love it! Great job with this chapter!

Holy SHIT that was the most EPIC lightsaber battle I've EVER READ

Don't you ever give up flying-yeah.

So good finally see a great Jess/Rey history!

Waiting for more!

Poor Jess!

Nice continuation

Please tell me Commander Vas got interrupted before she could blind Jess. Please tell me Commander Vas got interrupted before she could blind Jess. Please tell me Commander Vas got interrupted before she could blind Jess. If Jess can't fly... I don't even want to think what that would do to her. And Rey would blame herself and then misunderstandings will run amock.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Honestly, this story is the only reason why I keep coming back to this website!

Wow. I was not expecting THAT plot twist damn, Gida what the hell? I seriously thought she was going to help them! Anyway jess and rey interactions - always on point! Up until yknow...they get led into a trap haha but I have no doubt that rey will see to it that she tries everything in her power to get them out of there. Oh but hopefully luke and chewie get the memo that they're down two crew members. Anyhow, great update once again!

Great Rey-Jess bonding.

finally got around to reading this after a 10 hour work day and WOW WHAT A CHAPTER! first the talk between them with Gida (which i loved because I was expecting tension and animosity but I'm glad that wasn't the case here) and then having to flee (again - god they need a break!) and then the smut, which was wow! i'm a real sucker for love scenes where the main focus isn't just on the actions, but the underlying feelings too and you delivered and i died a thousand times over

and then after with rey's, "Please don't leave me" and Jess vowing never to break that promise - absolutely loved that. I've said it before but I'll say it again: i seriously love this story and what you're doing with it :)

They finally said on my wing! This story is so cute, keep going!