First, I love your writing.
Second, not too sure about this one.
It was a very important talk with James. But it seemed a bit heavy for an 18 yr old. Was this the first hint he acted this way? Did they not teach him earlier in his life?.
Third. It seemed this just clunked to a stop without any real closure. Did I miss something, like the name? I was left feeling like, what? Oh well, back to reading everything else on your list.

Okay

Good chapter!

great job

Hmm, I recognize that name suggestion. I really like your Lily and all the by-play about first dates.

Are you setting Lily up for a fem/fem relationship, or is this just an experiment until 'mister right' shows up? And who is Lily going to prank now that she's 'dating' the 'annoying Ravenclaw?'

I do hope you cover the discussion between Lily and Ginny, and, of course, eventually tell us the name chosen for the newest Potter.

As always, this was a delightful little vignette. I enjoyed Hermione blushing over the first date memory.

Hope all's well and looking forward to more of your wonderful work.

I don't like Ginny normally and this chapter is a very good example of why I don't like her. I can't believe she wants Harry to hex her son. She seems to treat her son and her brothers the same way. And I just can't get why they are both seemingly proud that Ginny dated other men during their relationship while Harry remained faithful. This chapter also shows the excessively strict approach H/G have to parenting in a lot of fanfiction. Even Albus and lily seem terrified of their parents. Don't know how healthy that is and a lot of it seems to come from Ginny modelling herself too much on Molly whose parenting style is fine for a woman with no money and seven children but is really not ideal.

Oh, this was great, another girl. I figured Lily Luna would come around and now she has a little sister to fuss over and help her prank her brothers when she's older. Are you taking suggestions for the newest Potter's name? I've always liked Lilith. Plenty of mythic connections with the name as well.

I take it you finished your history book?

Love this glimpse into adult Harry/Ginny :)

Wow, just wow. I never tire of a good Harry / Ginny story and this is one of the best. Hard to believe James acting that way at 18, he sounds more like a 15 year old. I also find it a little hard to believe that he would buy into all the codswallop that his uncles told him. Surely he'd be used to their ways growing up with them. Of course kids can be so gullible at times

I can definitely see Harry and Ginny acting the way they do, their love for each other is so deep and complete and their physical relationship is just one aspect of showing it to one another.

Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.

Loved it! H/G are a really good team!

Really enjoyed this story. The love between Harry and Ginny was amazing. Loved the way they shut down James. I was a bit confused by the discussion - Harry's been faithful, but Ginny's not? Very disappointing. I was wondering if you'd written about their eloping, but most of your stories seem to be about Ron and Hermione - not at all a fan of them. Anyhow, nice story.

Liked it a lot!

I have to comment again, this is such a fine story. I'm hoping James takes his dressing down seriously and pulls his socks up in time to have a chance to play Quidditch. I've always felt just like you, Quidditch is a rough, fast, hard nose sport and you have to be in top shape to have a prayer to play at the pro level.

I do hope you'll write a drabble about Lily and the Ravenclaw one day.