This was a real gem! Normally, I stay away from Bella/ anybody-but-Edward stories, but the reviews made me take a chance...glad I did!

Definitely an original story. Thanks for writing this.

Your writing is absolutely amazing. This story was out there but completely addicting and so well written!

This was a very interesting story. Thanks for sharing with us.

I am absolutely speechless. I absolutely adore this story, and I was driven to tears at the end. I can't even express how deeply this story affected me, how many chords it struck within me. This is one of those stories that I will visit over and over again for years to come. It was truly a wonder and an honor to go on this journey, and I cannot wait to do it again.

Er... maybe it's just me, but I think I see a big ole Aro-shapped hole in their plan. And that's just one person's power they know about

Omg that "time out" line from jasper! That was classic. Perect. That's what my mom would say to see which one of my siblings (or I) would talk first after a timeout. I almost choked on air I laughed so hard.

Jacob really is a stupid s.o.b. for showing up at her house when he was told explicitly not to. he's the alpha? god help the Indians if that is the case, I hope Victoria gets him first.

ooooooh, this is getting very exciting!

great chapter, it was fair to Bella or Jasper the way all the Cullen's treated them and i'm glad she told them off.

so charlotte and peter were fae before they were turned? well don't that beat all as my grandmomma would have said. (yes, she was a southern lady).

This has been a great story! thanks for sharing!

This was truly an amazing piece of literary art. I normally don't read more "out there" AU work when I'm browsing fanfiction and nearly did exit when more 'odd' things started being presented but I was hooked by the narrative, the way you wove your words and so I stuck with it. Needless to say hook, line, sinker. I loved near enough every word and just wanted to pass on my thanks.

Wow what an epic story. Love your Fae world -The lights, and the wings at the end (the visual on that! I've always wanted wings too) very cleverly written, merging the vampire and magical worlds, adding in actual mystical places, like Stonehenge, whilst still using 's universe.I truly believe there is far more to our world than we know.
I do love reading of Jasper and Bella stories, but I am an Edward fan too, and I was just a little sad he wasn't given the same 2nd chance, like Carlisle and Esme. Thank you for your story xx

Wow!

I could not stop reading this story once I started. It was so well thought out, and executed so well. I look forward to reading more of your work!