This is too depressing. *crying*

hahahaaa I was going into this fic thinking “wow I really like this one, it’s been a while” and then i got to chapter 10 and I thought wow fuck me this must be what unrequited love feels like. but ya know I really enjoyed it while it lasted so I’ll take what I can get. I hope one day you can find the motivation to continue this, thank you for writing as much as you already did!

I'm rlly sad this story isn't gonna continue coz it's been such an awesome fic to read and I wanted to read a lot more but understand this whole no motivation situation. Still gonna sob in a corner tho...

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Dang you cliffhanger dang you

Interesting story. I want to read more... :D

it may be a bit late for this but you should continue this story

I really enjoy how you developed Jun in comparison to other SI/OC ficss: how she patiently waits and quietly considers her options. Your plot seems well thought out, can't wait to see how you incorporate pairings into this story. I hope Jun will be paired with someone who also recognizes the dark politics involved in Konoha (I.e. Itachi, shisui, or kakashi).

This story is really interesting so far. I was wondering perhaps if when she killed her friend during root her sharingan evolved? I'm also interested to see where the whole "political climate between Kiri and Konoha" is going. Shisui and of course Itachi are always favorites so it's nice to see the CC addition to your story, but I also wanted to say that I think both of you OC characters are very interesting, and I've enjoyed the plot revolving around them thus far. I really hope that this story hasn't been dropped, because I see that it's almost been a year since you last updated. I think this story really has the makings of a very popular SI/OC fic, so please continue when you have the time. Thank you for all your hard work.

I'm pretty sure this is too late (or already stated) but Shisui is 3 years older than Itachi

Oh, using that quote for the last line was beautiful and ingenious. I'm actually awed by the effect it had, I kind of felt like you slammed my face into the feels. Very well done.

vivement la suite

Please continue this story!

this story is so damn well written, i love it. personally, i ship her with Yasuhiro bc they cute af and it would be original, and the generic oc/itachi ship is getting a bit boring for me, but it wouldn't put me completely off :) Also, i've been reading too many angsty stories recently lmfaoo, and whilst some angst is necessary for this story, I would really prefer for there to also be a lot of light hearted moments and i would really hate to see her stop smiling and become passive. Anyway, love your story! You're an amazing writer :)

Interesting story.