Shit this good.

noice.

Please please please continue this it is one of the best story's I have seen so far

Sucks that this book won’t be updated this is some fire man. This is a fucking amazing book

Please continue because there aren't many stories where jaune gets the fall maiden's powers and i really want to see team rwby's reactions when they learn the full truth

I'm a little bit unnerved by how spot on you are at most parts with this fic. But I ain't the type of guy who would complain about that kind of thing. Besides that. This chapter was good. I enjoyed this dark Jaune with his ideas on what could have happened and how his body was altered on the fight.

It is better be known as a sinner than to be known as a hypocrite. That about right? The fights were enjoyable, even the one against RWBY. Seems those naive girls are on for a wake up call. Jaune is right about those idiots. They messed up and refuse to take responsibility for all the shit they caused. I'm for more.
Saluut.

Really nice chapter, I like how the faint traces of Pyrrha's aura alowed Jaune to inberit the powers, it was a nice invention and a pausible explanation, I would like it if there were more parts were Ozpin showed grief for his actions and I am not sure what happened to Glynda but other than that it was a good read and I enjoyed reading it.

Awesome story!

Damn... That was awesome.. XD

Amazing great work

IMO: This is how RWBY should have ended.

Got overly hammy towards the end... But it was mostly believable and a good story to boot.

Wow. Normally I don't like 1/2 shots, but I really enjoyed this one. An amazing piece of work, that's for sure.

I have to say, I enjoyed this quite a lot. Nicely done. Also, as I read this, I couldn't help but think how the song Who I Am from Magna-fi fits well with Jaune's persona.

Fucking badass