Lol the cat is named duke

Okay, I absolutely love this fic and have reread it more than once. My one complaint is that you call them fiancés in the summary, then you call them husbands in the first part of the story, then you call them boyfriends in the middle, then you call them fiancés again at the end. I'm pretty sure you intended for them to be fiancés the whole time but it is a wee bit confusing, lol.

You should definitely Keri updating. This is super cute! :)

Actually, you do use all three descriptors. Your narrative has John musing about Sherlock checking for "his husband", nestling into "his boyfriend's" arms, then describing himself to the Yarders as Sherlock's fiance (fiancee is feminine and refers to a woman,which John certainly is not).

I don't know who left you the message you're ranting about, but if you are going to publish your work-even if only on a fanfic site-you need to expect some criticism. Instead of ranting about it, maybe you should consider what they have to say and use the relevant parts of it to improve your work. You can't have a thin skin if you want to write, or you'll drive yourself crazy.

Ok you made your point, some reviews make you upset. But I think that's the point of it to make you want to do better? Sorry I'm just trying to help you out.

I on the other hand loved this and found nothing wrong with it! So you made one mistake, every author here has at some point. I know I have. Plenty. But this was so cute! Thanks! Now, is there going to be more or is this it? I'm good with whatever.

Ingrid, this is amazing and you rant most eloquently. I hope this Guest did not spoil your day.

Very funny

Adorable! I love how worried Sherlock gets over John and how shocked the Yarders are to find out someone else is living there :) Great job!