Please update

I know this review is way overdue but things just got busy. Looks like Minato got himself some trouble with Miya. But even so, that was funny to read.

And hot. Even without access to Minato, the girls got their shares of fun. With Tsukiumi and Musubi, I couldn’t help but smile on how that went for the two. They can practice indeed and so far, I like what that all entails.

But with Matsu and Akitsu, that must have been cold. We can wonder who got in his room. Uzume and Kazehana. I wonder how that will go. And I like what you have done here with those two. That was hot to read. He really made comparisons with the other girls. I like it.

And it looks like Kazehana knew Minato from before. So far, this was a good lot of fun here. With some threatening but hey, you take what you get. So far, it has some down time. The whole other thing, makes it clear that they are going to fight back.

But with Minato, it looks like he got some plans to help Haruka and Kuno. I can only wonder how that might go down. He also found out some bits more of the past. Besides that, Kochou was only on the talk and that is funny to see how Matsu reacted to her. But I can’t wait to see how that might go. With Kazehana, that is just waiting until they agree on helping them out.

But with the training, the girls really should think on what Miya can do. I like what are doing here with them and the stuff is pretty good. Some things hit close to canon. So far, it looks like they got some adversaries out there.
But they also got that party. And I like that despite it all, they got some lemons out there. Tsukiumi really likes doing that to her Ashikabi. You really spend a lot of good times on that.

Again, my apologies for taking nearly six months to review it but things got busy. And well, you’ve been quiet too.
Saluut.

I actually, physically cringed...

Add Miya and Karasuba

Great story. For this fendom, there are always not enough good stories like yours. Interesting plot and a large number of lemons.

Awesome chapter ill wont lie i thought it was funnybas hell that matsu got miya drunk and what next is she going to kiss minato

Not really a Halloween themed story or a Halloween themed chapter but it was still great.

"That's rrrrrrright", I just imagine Gleen Quagmire in this scene.

as good as ever

i am loving the moments between Tsukiumi and Minato

Nice stories and lemon, i hope you add number 1, 3, 4, 10 and 21

Love it, will Yume be able to switch with Musubi anytime, because I want to read about Minato doing it with Yume.

I cant wait till minato wings 22 and i hope he gets 3,6,and hopefully 84

#Don'tFuckHiga
#Don'tLetYourFriendsFuckHim
#He'sUnfuckworthy

I gotta say I enjoyed this story. It is nice to have some porn with plot in a story like this. I am interested in what you have set up for in the future. Specifically the girls you have set up, but done nothing with.

Yomi, is the most obvious as she was teased earlier in the story, but you haven't really done anything with her. It seems like we haven't seen her for about seven chapters.

Kuchuo has come in this last chapter, I wonder how she will be included in the harem given that Matsu is already a part of it.

Ichiya you indicated to be leaving Higa and joining Minato which will be interesting to see how she breaks her bond.

You brought up 3 other Sekirei in Chapter 5 being Benitsubasa, Haihane and I think Juusa. I doubt you'll include them in his flock at this stage, but I can dream.

Kazehana and Homura are probably going to be the same as their regular introductions into Minato's flock.

Also, I think I'm looking forward to Yukari and Shiina the most as I hope that they are that interesting threesome you had hinted at back in Chapter 7. Also a flashback to how Yukari and Minato first began their relationship would be nice.

Takami is one I think would be nice given how the story started, but it would be rather difficult to write I imagine.

Uzume is the one you have hinted at the most given how you have said that her crest is smudged on. I theorize that this means that she can have two Ashikabi and that by winging with Minato it will become clear. So that means that he can then have an awesome threesome with Uzume and Chiho once she is out of Higa's clutches (maybe with Ichiya's help?).

If you have any time I'd like to be of service whether it be suggestions on how the story goes or even by helping proofread so that there aren't too many grammatical errors.