Reviews for Bone-ified Family |
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![]() ![]() Ohhhhh my god. I love this so much. you don't even know. It took a lot of motivation, creativity, and DETERMINATION to make it this far. I hope you figure things out and reach your passions and goals. This story made me love Undertale so much, and now I'm imagining this as canon, the game continuing here. You gave amazing and logical explanations for many things in Undertale in your story, and I applaud that :D I hope you continue to do what you love, and stay happy content. |
![]() ![]() ![]() havent even finished the first chapter and i already love this! this made me smile, and i don't smile at just anything. great work! |
![]() ![]() UNDERSWAP! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What I really love in this fandom is when sans can be Frisk's dad without pairing him with Toriel. Not that fond of that pairing as I only see them as friends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If I were to continue the story from here there would be a couple more resets before they find a way to cure Chara's poisoning from the void. Those resets will be slight torture to the characters, but in the end everyone escapes happy. Frisk lives with the skelefamily. I won't write it because the ending is fine though not what I wanted. It is best not to answer all of the questions so that you can leave the rest to the imagination of the readers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m so confused. Was semi an OC? Also the let down ending was totally unexpected after the wonderful fluff. But this was a good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wait if he has all the souls why doesnt he break the barrier? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dont worry this story is so cUTE! |
![]() ![]() There is a discontinuity error in this chapter. If what I read is right, then in this chapter Grillby is the one who got Sans his blue jacket. But in a previous chapter in which Sans gave Frisk his jacket, he remnisces about how he saved a lot of money to buy his specially made jacket which is made out of heavy materials to keep himself grounded. Just something that I wanted to bring your attention to, and for you to hopefully fix or clear up. |
![]() ![]() I now ship sans and happiness |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this chapter! :) Who Menders that dangled 4th wall, anyway? |
![]() ![]() the number of chapters fills me with DE- w8 no, the word i want is DREAD. |
![]() ![]() umm... was going to say somefin but i forgot it. i guess i approve of your otp? i mean i guess it's not my favorite... or anywhere close... but i don't h8 it, and refuse to say anyfin other. |
![]() ![]() Aw. This was a great story. Sad to see its over but i loved it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. O-Oh my g-god *sniff* This s-story I-I can't... THIS WAS SUCH AN EMOTIONAL ROLLER COASTER! (TT v TT) Oh and don't worry about the ending, I completely understand. And besides it will give people time to speculate how sans will ( or will not, even though I doubt that) get back his happy ending. I loved this fic and everything about it! SANSXHAPPINESS! |