I just want to say as a fellow writer that this story is phenominal. The details are astounding, and the amount of research you did is definitely admirable. I'm also in awe of your side-characters, because despite their smaller roles they have viable depth. Reading this really inspired me to do better with a lot of my stories, Good Job

I can’t get enough of this story. Wonderfully written. I can see how the angst could be harder to write.

Just reread this fic for like the 7th time def one of my favorites

Okie, so, Marinette... YOU DONE DUCKED UP

aaaaaa I love this story so much, it's my fav MLB fanfic and I can't get enough of it

Its an okay story. Maybe its just bc it was written long ago. So lots of the details just seem...off. Chat and Ladybug can communicate through their transformations. They can even leave messages. Wouldnt that be a way to communicate. Also the fact that she planned moving to America for school before she even defeated hawkmoth. Its really out of character. But i guess thats why its an AU.

Are you going to continue this at some point? I'd love it if you did! I come back to read this from time to time, I adore your writing as well as this story. I'd love to know what happens! Please!

ahh omg this is AMAZING! i stumbled on this fanfic a couple of years ago but i closed the tab and couldnt find it, but i found it again and im OBSESSED! I love it! 3

thank you for writing this AMAZING fanfic! i really hope you can continue on with it bc it is by far the best one ive EVER read! 333

Why did you abandon this story. It's good, I find it kinda graphomanic but in a good sense :)

Man, that was another awesome chapter, and 13 was great too!
I absolutely LOVE your writing style and I can hardly wait for you to post Chapter 14!
It's been a while since you last updated... I hope you're ok?
Anyway, I'll keep checking in for any updates and I look forward to seeing how this story continues progressing.
signing off,
a HUGE, and I hope supportive, fan
Hana Aki

Please update soon! I know it’s hard but it’s been a while and I’d hate to abandon this story

Very interesting story

Hello! I've been quite conflicted about this story because even though the writing is very good I couldn't cope with the fact that Marinette would leave like that, and not find a way to let him know in SEVEN fing years. I mean, even a few days are barely acceptable imo.
And what about the fact that Adrien seems non-existent in her life before she go to NY? Isn't she supposed to be in love with the guy ? stalker-like love ? How is it that she doesn't even spare a thought for him ? And I know it makes sense that she would have had other bfs at 25 but I am still disappointed that she had this Bryce in her life.
Sorry I feel like I'm ranting but the story cleans up beautifully and better with each chapter. So thank you ! (and the smut part was just... wow !)
I don't know if you ever plan to pick it up but remember that you don't owe it to anyone and if it becomes a chore and no longer a pleasure to write it you are allowed to drop it.
I do hope all is well in your life though and that the unexplained hiatus is not due to serious issues. There is so much drama everywhere and from your notes you sound like such a nice person I can't help but feel a little concerned (although I don't know you so it sounds a little overboard... still true tho).
Also just as a side note, if Hélène is supposed to be French I would recommend to add the e otherwise it looks weird to a French person.
If course do as you want !

I think it's great that you're so honest with your fanbase. Don't let readers of little patience stress you out. I'm following this story and look forward to later chapters, whenever they may come.