Wheee! I'd not come across this one before!
Love Quinlan being Very Bloody Aware of that...

OMG, I love this, Quinlan is the most incredible and amazing character in both the book and tv shows. I haven't seen any ffc about him before, but now I have and this one is sooooooooooo beautiful!
YOU DID A GREAT JOB! GOODS ON YOU!

OH GOD!
THANK YOU! THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH!
IT'SO It's so sad and beautiful
And horror, purgatory for the souls of the vessels. really dark!
And this phrase "I was born too late, but I still found you." I think it best reflects what Coco was supposed to be. I think if she had been born earlier. If she had met him before. Maybe he would find the meaning of his life in her and did not go into a deal with the Master ever.

Can I translate this chapter into Russian? And publish in a Russian forum? if you do not mind?

I couldn't exactly figure it out so I have to ask. Do they or don't they have the 'necessary parts' here in your fics? I thought they did but then it kinda seemed like they didn't and now the curiosity is killing me.

Wow Fet had lost his mind. He keeps disrespecting Quanlin and Vaun and their women he has a beating coming soon. I don't get it, is Vaun with Rae or Domitilla? It's confusing, Lexi stood up for her man so did Rae . I love it.
Please update soon.

Wow Vaun is really sweet but what about Quanlin woman?

Nice update, but I had no idea what this was about its been so long I had to go back and read chapter a and 2. But I love it . Please continue it.

This OS is, how did humans describe it? Ah, yes, cute. :3
(i hope you understand, i don't speak english very well)

Love it! Please keep going!

I love this story. The born has a woman, how nice please update soon.

Nice chapter, Vaun is a nice guy.

I like it. I will continue to read when updated