Amazing story i hope you you update this story its great

I only got through half of the first chapter but it was just too cringe. Sorry but the mid fight flirting and Arslan calling Ruby a kid (its a bit try hard when she’s not even an adult yet). The song was weird too and if Ruby really wanted to forfeit she could have plugged/covered her ears. That said Arslan doesn’t have any real screen time outside the fight scene so we don’t know her personality that well. She seemed like a serious person from what little we see though not someone trying to be the “cool girl”.

Bashing isn’t seen as a plus to any story. You might not want to advertise that if you want more readers.

This is great and those two are so cute together. So yang just made everything worse for ruby. Can't wait to see where you will take this keep up the good work.

Need more plz

More plz

This really needs a update

amazing, please update again soon. I need to see what happens next

This was such a sweet and nice story.

I WANT MORE! I love this story and I want to read more

What a wonderful story! Loved each chapter! I suppose it won't see any continuation as it's been 2 years. But this was truly amazing work. Nice job!

Yang was really that really necessary ruby was doing fine without doing what you just did also it almost got arslan killed though after fight arslan seems to found or picked her mate she also possessive and protective not letting jaune touch ruby.

huh.

This is great! The largest piece of bullshit I've ever read. You are creative and talented, if incapable of committing to something, but you also have a tendency to post enough poorly written shit to bury the good stories. Just my opinion.

I can't possibly rate this highly enough I've read this so many times I lost count and I still love it