that was good keep the chapters coming

Nice, story. Also when you said the final one-on-one pairing, could it be sasuke or perhaps Ichigo for main male role?

I mean bro cmon have naruto help nanael unlock her full potential and get her full set of wings have naruto help Elina realize her selfish ways won't get her anywhere if you can make one with melona in it despite her evil personality why not nanael and elina

great story also read your other fic's like the two you cross with naruho's doujin's do you think you can do ones cross Kuroni juu's he does a lot of rape doujin's with anime most being of sailor moon characters pm me if you want to talk to me about just a suggestion

Dude can you please stop dancing around them i know you don't like nanael or elina I don't care for there personalities either but you could have them redeemed I would really love to see you make them redeemable so please make a maelstrom story with them already please you skipped them several times now and you have jumped into the new season without having them

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Nice!
But can I give you a suggestion. Can you do the girls from highschool dxd.

Great work again, good sir. Can't wait for Werbellia and Tiina to get their chance with Naruto.

Please put more of an adventure in your next story because this one I felt stunk without one. I have high hope for the one with Tiina in it though.

I don't usually review lemon stories, but I will make an exception here. Loved the concept, and the execution was good too. As for your next story? I want to see Werbellia ASAP. After having two gorgeous daughters and still maintaining a figure that most women would kill to have? Definitely a winner in my book. Anyway, happy birthday to Sketchfan! I hope it is a productive one for you.

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