I mean not enough mind dialogue I need a little more but I really love this story

I really like this fanfic one of my favorite read. I'm so excited to see the next story.

The only thing I could think of making the story better is that mind dialogue.

I love the idea that Grayfia love and help Naruto with his shinobi career. but after he became a hero or a sage. Will he go to DxD world to fight great red? how will the evil piece work if that happens lol

I'm so fascinated with your story idea that I'm having ideas pop-up wondering how you going to end it.

Thanks for really fun read

Damn. Really interesting story! Love the interactions betweens Naruto and Grayfia!

I wish you continue this awesome story!

Are you going to update this

Are you going to update this

its a great story ngl its a beatiful sory

Great story hope you update soon.

I'm surprised Grayfia didnt give a scan to at least a degree and pick up on those two.

I'm fairly sure the Uzumaki probably paid plenty. If anything it would be Seal maintenance mostly as well as cracking found seals, enemy or not.

I was thinking a play in growlithe minus the stripes.

Hakuuuuuu...

Meh. Wonder if this is a potential setup for him to acquire a King piece and devilhood so as not to die of old age way before she does. Which still with the single pairing... meh. Moving on, let's see what's next.

Didnt like the unpleasantly out of character bit eith Hana as she gets little attention and seeing her get it finally in that way was a downer. Liked it even less with the hint of her likely having experienced an attempted rape in her previous mission if not a successful one which I doubt and rather not be the case.

Anyway aside from that unpleasantness it was a great chapter.

Oh what a beautiful chapter. I'd I could change one thing it would be bumping the deaths of her parents back so that they interrupted it happening and got her to join with her parents blessing.

If for nothing else just the fact I'm absolutely tired of the dead parents shtick.

I get enough if that in nearly every other stories I come across that dont involve Isekai (still even then...) or orphans with no named reason and a rare few others. For some reason all MCs parents HAVE to fucking die and with the Narutoverse its quite a few parents.

I love this setup.

Personally I wish it was a harem with Anko and Hinata added but that's me and like I said, as is it's already really good.

hope you update soon. Great story.

Let's just hope they don't have any airplanes near those two teams any time soon.