I love the way you write the inside of Jane's head, and all of the metaphorical comparisons and evocative descriptions here. :)

That was such loveliness and yet so heartbreaking for what happens next.

Love how you convey exactly what it feels like to really vibe with someone: being in the right place at the right time.

haha, I love the line that the adjective "steady" was made for Weller.

Actually, I just love all of Jane's thoughts about flying.

Those steady hands and kind blue eyes - ah, love. Such simple words, but love them.

Kurt Weller as a parachute. Just... the imagry. So much has happened since the kiss now.
I want to go back to this simpler time. So glad I read this!

loved it! You seem to catch Jane perfectly, and I love her little names for Weller

This. Is. Awesome.

this us the most amazing thing ihave ever read the writing the evergthing it is just perfect and brilliant omg i am soin love with this

Wow, theres so much to love about this! The comparisons to skydiving are perfect. It was really well written - a pleasure to read!

Good... such a great story!

Dang... this is really, really good! Love the consistent metaphor's throughout, and watching as Jane goes through her thought process. Really consistent with her character... definitely a realistic explanation for all that she is thinking and feeling throughout these episodes. Awesome fic!

I love this so much! The metaphor of flying and the parachute that runs through the whole thing is so great and well thought out, and it perfectly links and explains Jane's feelings through all the events of the last four episodes! Also, I love the introspection that we get from Jane, especially the dry, self-deprecating internal dialogue. And all the fangirling she does over Weller? So cute!
Highlights: Frequent flying bastard. Weller being the dictionary definition of steadiness, Double-O Weller, anything involving the pizza/beer night Jane wanting to dance with Kurt again!
"She can't think of a way to be more alone in the world than to live with the ghost of a girl she can't remember." - This was so powerful and insightful, probably my single favourite line. And the part where you discuss how Kurt looks at THAT Jane. Ugh, that was such a perfect analysis of that whole episode.
Seriously I love this. Thank you! Hopefully we can see more from you soon! :)