Reviews for Two Lords
oitaitai5 chapter 1 . 4/6/2016
This is great. Best fanfiction I've ever read. Make another sequel for this hut with Galamoth and Time Reaper as the villains.
Onkgopotse410 chapter 1 . 3/31/2016
This is great but you didn't give Soma his true form. And I would think that the best ending should end with Soma telling Nura that Arikado is his son in disguise and Mina is his wife reborn. If you did that I wwould laugh to see the face of Nura and his friends and family at the truth.
Onkgopotse410 chapter 12 . 3/23/2016
Pick the first one would be surprising to see Nura's fave when he sees Menace.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/21/2016
Wow this is great can't wait for the Best Ending, the suspense is killing me!
Onkgopotser410 chapter 10 . 3/7/2016
HOLY SHIT! NOW THAT IS THE POWER OF DARKNESS! CAN'T WAIT FOR HIS TRUE FORM!

BTW: I'm glad you're better now. Man, with every chapter, it gets better.
Onkgopotse410 chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
For spoilers here's the characters:
MAIN:

Soma Cruz
SUPPORTING:

Merchant(the name will change)
Death
Ryan Ebenezer
ANTAGONIST:

Olrox
Galamth

And here's Soma's and Ryan's info:

Soma Cruz

The most powerful reincarnation of Dracula. Though reborn in a human body, he possesses the power of dominance over his past self's minions. Now with the memories of his past self regained along with his other awakening demonic powers, will he continue living as the human Soma or finish off his raging war against humanity as Dracula?
A vampire Devil Forgemaster guardian of Mina Hakuba. Once human, his parents and little sister were killed by the Nosferatu Olrox and sought vengeance.

Carrying a whip of mysterious power, he pursues Olrox in Castlevania only to be brutally wounded and saved by Soma/Dracula's blood before nearing death.

And here is their info history:

Soma:

In the past years he has been wielding the power of dominance, but after Celia's scheme to turn him into the dark lord, his past memories are starting to awaken along with the dark powers he wielded in his time as the dark lord and has now entered his/Dracula's home to investigate 2 things:
*His past awakened memories
*The mysterious demonic energy flowing about in the castle.

After the defeat of Olrox, a soul appears in the throne room, obliterating Soma in the process but as he fades for eternity, a vision of his past wife is shown being burned alive by the townspeople. The memory was so agonizing that it triggered Soma's hidden anger and hate thus transforming him into True Dracula(his demon form).

With the mysterious soul now surprised, it realizes who Soma really is and swears that Soma will die at all costs and tells him to follow it into the 'other' castle. The soul leaves with Soma confused but then senses a extremely huge demonic power coming from the next room. It is a castle.

It's revealed to be a fusion of ALL of the Castle's previous incarnations by which the soul created and now rules. After the soul leaves Soma realizes that that particular soul is none other than the soul of the time gladiator and space warlord Galamoth. With a time seal crafted by the time guardian Aeon, Soma sets out into the time castle, defeating its guardians until reaching the throne where Galamoth is now fully revived with a purest hate for Soma for imprisoning his soul and forcing it under his command and sentences Soma to a brutal death.

After Galamoth's defeat, he states "If I'm not the one destined to rule the netherworld, the I will ensure that no one else will!"

With this statement, Soma realizes that with Galamoth's unstable mind, he plans to cast a spell that will literally destroy time itself. Not content with this, Soma produces Claimh Solais now in a fiery blue aura surrounding it and stakes Galamoth's heart with it thus destroying his body for good. But with the soul still existing Soma creates a spell by fusing all of his dominated souls into one, producing a beam of destructive force called 'Soul Obliterate' to destroy Galamoth's soul, wiping it clean from existence without a trace.

With Galamoth's soul gone forever, the time castle is destroyed and Soma is sent back into the throne room one more.

Now with Galamoth obliterated Death convinces Soma to destroy humanity but suddenly, without expectation Leon Belmont's soul appears pleading Soma, now being called Mathias not to hate humans. Soma then argues that humanity sentenced his wife to death and asks Leon why shouldn't he pursue his vengeance, Leon then tells Mathias(Soma) that his wife is reincarnated again as Mina Hakuba. With Soma in complete thought he is asked by Leon whether will he continue living a miserable life as the dark lord or enjoy his life with his wife again. Death threatens Leon to enslave his soul but Soma stops him, knowing that Leon is right and then commands the castle to send him back to Earth. Leon thanks Soma while Death stating that Soma will come back eventually without even trying to stop nor kill him.

Ryan:

After the ultimate battle between Soma and Galamoth, Soma has accepted him as a servant and possible brother and has taught him the arts of Devil Forging along with Death.

With the knowledge he has gained from Soma's continuous trainings, he forged powerful weapons related to his powers and now commands 7 familiars. Months after the final redemption, Jacob now vows to protect Elizabetha, now reincarnated as Mina at the cost of his own life due to the past history that Soma has explained to him.

Now in the year 2040, he now hopes to carry out his lifeline duty and honour his parents' death by slaying demons that threatens mankind but respects Soma's legion of monsters in the Castle.

With the proper Forging from Death and the magical and alchemical practices from Soma, he believes and knows that one day, he might surpass & replace Death as Soma's faithful confidant.
Onkgopotse410 chapter 9 . 2/26/2016
When I meant 'rival' I meant Dracula's true ultimate enemy. The game will be about Soma entering his castle to see it taken over by vampire Olrox who is actually being manipulated by the Demon Galamoth so that he can create and forge a new castlevania made from ALL castlevanias in the timeline and rule it. But he doesn't know that Dracula is now reincarnated and if he fonds alout about Soma, he will start throwing hate vibes at him.

Basically the purpose of the game is Soma gaining his past memories and lost dark powers and using them to obliterate Galamoth before he revives. (Side notes he is a ghost until the End game and it will conclude in Soma destroying the time castle and rule his normal castle, go back to Earth and probably give Mina a kiss saying "you're back to me...again" expose Arikado as his son,etc.

Sorry, but to tell you the truth, I'm actually a low-level programmer and I don't think that I'll easily make this game but I promise you this game will be made in the future. As they say there's always hope.
Onkgopotse410 chapter 8 . 2/23/2016
This fanfiction keeps getting better and better. Thanks for agreeing with me. Hmmm...maybe when I finish my works, I'll create a new game called: Castlevania Rival of Sorrow featuring Soma Cruz and Galamoth.
Onkgopotse Itait chapter 7 . 2/16/2016
Good. Because in both Aria and Dawn of Sorrow, we only get to play Dracula's power of Dominance and none of his other abilities. It makes the fans seem that Soma is just an inheritor of Dracula's powers when he is not. Keep up the great work, can't wait for chapter 8. Man, I wish there was a new castlevania game where we can play as Soma Cruz, but with ALL of Dracula's powers.
Onkgopotse Itait chapter 6 . 2/12/2016
This fanfiction is the best I've ever read. I wonder, since Soma has ALL of Dracula's powers, does he also have Dracula's true form and Demonic Megiddo? Cause that would be even more awesome.