Huh?

This is unbelievable irritating

Huh? Why...

I was pretty sure the ship was named Dragon Slayer... But that's just me though

I was listening to bruises and bitemarks by good with grenades, while reading that last scene, it made the whole scene feel like it was spinning, if that makes sense. I'm sad because i only started reading this story on Wednesday. I really love what I'm reading.

Urgh. Please. Put question marks in questions, please.

I like this more

Yeah, you’re right. This is super over dramatic. This story was really good and was hitting solid beats for the first 10-11 chapters, but then it devolved into something pretty cringe. What with the whole mindscape and conversation in it between Jaune and Yang, Ozpin’s conduct and withholding information, all the characters in the two main teams just being pretty stupid in how they act, way beyond their levels of actual idiocy that can be reached. It was pretty OOC.

Honestly, so far I’d give this story a 6/10. It jumps around abit too much, in multiple ways. Honestly the romance aspect has died since chapter 13 and doesn’t seem likely to come back to live realistically anytime soon, nor have actual growth to turn into an actual relationship. It could have, but then your coma plot took too much time up and ruined it.

Too taxing to read 8 straight chapters of angst. This has gone into Edgy territory 5 chapters ago. I can't do the CONSTANT angst with maybe 1 or 2 paragraphs of relief between the drama. Drama, drama and MORE drama. The constant dancing around the Burning Bush became annoying. Not doing 5 more chapters of overkill drama for the sake of drama. Ending is probably going to be underwhelming, a cliff hanger
or rushed as f*ck. Story sucked since chapter 17, anyway.

This is one of the best Jaune x Yang fanfiction out there

4 years wow, Dragonslayer was honestly my first ship and still my fave crack ship, I found this story when it was nearly new and every chapter made me more and more invested.
Your dedication to their romance was wonderful, I believed in it with every word. I wanted them to be happy!
And now this story has reached its conclusion, there were times I was worried I'd never see this day and reading those final words brought tears to my eyes.
Thank you so much for this, it will forever be one of my favorites!

Nice ending

Awesome :)

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Sweet story loved it to the end
Keep up the good work