Reviews for The Strongest Man
ParadoxTheory374 chapter 5 . 7/22
Kinda annoyed they are keeping him close so he can pretty much be a test subject for them.
I am vegito chapter 5 . 4/28
great STory peter as OPM cant plazz update
koseta.a chapter 3 . 2/3
Pfft all this third person talking from doom suddenly had me imagining him like 3 feet tall its a hilarious image
koseta.a chapter 1 . 2/2
Really? You couldn't be unique? You had to give him the same fugly costume?
reynardgautama chapter 5 . 12/12/2019
Great and interesting story
StoneTheLoner chapter 3 . 12/8/2019
The story fell apart in this chapter
StoneTheLoner chapter 2 . 12/8/2019
I wish you had toned down the innuendos or didn't write them at all. The story doesn't need them.
StoneTheLoner chapter 1 . 11/22/2019
But why though? They invaded his privacy, showed up at his doorstep and both pressed for information about his powers and how they came about as well as asked to begin experimenting on him... so why did he agree? He's a hobby hero, that's a deal more suited to a serious hero. You should have given a reason for why he's doing something so out of character.
MysticRising chapter 2 . 10/20/2019
Tsk tsk tsk. Older women praying on teenage boys. For shame.
And wouldn't it be cool if it's like all humans (and sentient life) have infinite potential, and all they need to do is unlock it. Like no one is special, but everyone has the potential to be special, to surpass their limits, plus ultra! Uh, I mean, well surpass your limits? Ya get it.
MysticRising chapter 1 . 10/20/2019
Nice. Poor Gwen. The OPM's emotional degradation is not to be taken lightly. I hope she does make it work with peter.
Also kudos for the idea. It's usually hard to work with the one punch power with crossovers unless you give a shit ton of kill able monsters, or as it is usually proper you make a compelling emotional story and some social commentary as well as pretty illustrations and lots and lots of comedy.
Jerry250 chapter 5 . 10/2/2019
Was a good read, thanks.
DarkDrawerJ chapter 5 . 7/9/2019
I know this will never be uploaded, but that was hilarious and fun to read! Thank you!
Shadic21 chapter 5 . 7/5/2019
Good chapter, I want to see the next part.
Brave2000 chapter 5 . 6/20/2019
wow, this story is growing on me in a way i didn't thought possible. this is one creative and interesting crossover. i can't wait to see more.
keep up the good work!
ethan.lukkar chapter 5 . 5/11/2019
Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon
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