Mmmmm i wonder what naruko and hinata are planning..

Nice Story

of course she knows the clone jutsu all academy students are required to know it to pass with a few exceptions like lee and naruto

never mind

CONTINUE PLEASE

Well it’s official. Sasuke, just as naruto, is a beta cuck little bitch. After Itachi refuses to do as his parents ask do they now show Sasuke attention. Even after being told this Sasuke completely forgives them for a lifetime of neglect and being constantly belittled while being compare to his older brother.

There is no reason to read anymore of this story. It’s a well written story with okay dialogue and character development in of itself. But as a neglect fic it is pure garbage.

“Still wants motherly affection.” Damn, I guess this is going the way of beta cuck immediate forgiveness.

Naruto hugging his sister after finally letting out his feelings is disconcerting. I really hope he doesn’t turn into a “turn the other cheek” beta bitch. She new what was happening but didn’t really try to change things. He doesn’t have to hate her but he doesn’t have to be nice. He is still a kid and resentment of his favored sister is natural. I really hate it when neglect fics make the neglected a beta cuck. It really defeats the purpose of what a neglect fic is supposed to be about.

I hope the next couple of chapters prove me wrong.

GOOd Job Udayjjw!

Will Naruto have his own Battle avatar just like Ashura?

More chapters please

Had a problem with this chapter mainly using genin to catch a chunin and two powerful brothers with bad reps. Not sure why a force of thousands would be so depleted. Changing Canon is tricky and when small changes are left undone(Minato is alive, Jiraiya is around, there are Uchiha alive and well) the usage of genin for a prison break of shinobi doesn't fit. Where are the Byakugan wielding shinobi, Inuzaku hunters, Uchiha police force; between these three clans, no way Mizuki and two behemoths get out of the village. Also, without Kyuubi's chakra not involved and already noting his excellent chakra control, why is Naruto using two hands to make his Rasengan?

Thanks

DB

Is Sasuke pairing already set in stone ?if it isn't then please use anyone else like perhaps Naruko but not Sakura, I have never been able to find the rationale in the Sasuke/Sakura pairing I just don't see it working.

Great story! Hope 4 more soon! Take care!

I really like this story I don’t really write so I can’t give you any criticism but please keep writing