Reviews for Butterfly Wings
Jimbocous chapter 34 . 9/18
Thanks for another excellent read! Very nicely done ...
JamesJW02 chapter 34 . 6/7
Very sad when harry and theo had their final moments. very glad to have read this fic. although abit more focus on the relationship would be nice.
she-who-waits-in-darkness chapter 34 . 2/24/2019
Kinda glad I read for the price of a soul first. But man this was a sad ending.
Guest chapter 34 . 7/15/2018
I enjoyed the fact that Harry' died, even though it pissed me off
PWAAH chapter 1 . 10/23/2016
Review of the whole book: I loved how asexual/aromantic-ism is explained. As to the ending, it was a bit anti-climactic, I wish they had both fought more against it. On that line, I wish less events followed the book. Without that as filler, Harry would have had opportunities to do much more and it still would make sense since so many other elements and plot points are changed. As a whole it is a bit slow going, mostly because of all the side plots that are included (there is enough material for another ~50,000 words). Another thing was that because so many characters are focused on, there is less time for individual characterization so that even in the end I felt kind of apathetic to everyone and their fates. However that could just be a side effect of Harry's acceptance in the last chapters.
mckertis chapter 1 . 9/23/2016
So what ? Lily was just randomly a slut ? Drop.
JazyV100 chapter 34 . 8/19/2016
Achk! This left me feeling numb... it was good but now I just feel numb
Lila Dunmare chapter 34 . 7/25/2016
Tha was great ! A bit unusual but great
bloodedlife94 chapter 19 . 6/19/2016
whoop! have read up until here before and hand to reread all og it again when I saw that you had finished the fic
now on to the rest which I haven't read. This is going to be so exciting!
Resatice chapter 34 . 5/26/2016
Amazing story! It made me laugh, cry, be angry, and then sad more than once. While I'm heart broken that Harry couldn't find a way out of his deal I'm glad that he died the way that he did. It seemed to fit more than a random fix. I really loved what you did with all of the characters and how you got to see them grow over the course of the story. A job very well done!
secrets21988 chapter 34 . 5/20/2016
I have truly enjoyed reading this story. You're perspective of how different Harry's life could've been is very refreshing.
On the whole I found the whole story to be well written, the plot intriguing and surprising in places.
I was sorry that Lord Valentine didn't find a way to save his son, I was still holding out hope but it wasn't to be.
I hope there will be more from you about this "parallel Harry Potter universe" that you have created, I especially want to see more of Gareth at some point and also Theo, he is a very complex and interesting character.
Thank you for a very good read!
Resatice chapter 2 . 5/19/2016
This is the first time I've seen a fanfic where one of thr characters is Sikh. It feels nice knowing that my own religion gets a place in this story
qwertyuiopj chapter 9 . 5/14/2016
nice story, original and well written. Thanks.
I like your original character jennifer she sounds badass.
Lilly Cheyenne chapter 34 . 5/12/2016
I loved this story and would love if you wrote a sequel! I have an idea if you would like to PM me.
Lunacom chapter 34 . 5/11/2016
I would like to think that Dean and Sam will recognise him when they go to hell and find out Sam(or was it Dean?) is supposed to be the Antichrist.
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