| Reviews for RWBY Tail |
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   TotalWeeb chapter 13 . 7/24 Problem presents itself Ironwood: Dick Measuring contest! |
| Gamma-X chapter 6 . 6/22 Wait, 2016? Didn't we already know that Blake's dad was the leader of the White Fang at this point? Also, is it just me, or is Natsu and his group just tagalongs to the main cast in this story? Meaning they have absolutely no effect whatsoever in the plot despite their involvement? If so, why are they there? |
| Gamma-X chapter 5 . 6/22 You wrote "Completion:" but you meant to write "Complexion:" Just letting ya know. Nice trailer. Rather short though. |
| Gamma-X chapter 4 . 6/22 Oooh! Natsu and Velvet are friends?! YES! Although..I can't get my hopes up since the pairing says Natsu x Yang... *cries in the corner* But, this was outstanding interaction between Natsu and Velvet, I quite love it. I hope to see more, and more of Ryuko-chan. It's a shame this ain't a harem, single solid pairings make things so hard but so nice! x'c Ja Ne~! |
| Gamma-X chapter 3 . 6/21 Team Never? What color is Never? did you forget about the Color Rule in RWBY? Every name *must* have a relation to a color. Or does Never have a relation to Gray or something? Also, Natsu x Yang? I mean, I love Yang since she's funny as hell, but I was hoping for Velvet, cuz she doesn't have enough to fics. Is like no one likes our resident chocolate bunny. xC (#LizardXBunny) Though, I don't have a problem with Yang, just something I wanted to say. I wonder how Natsu will react to Cardinal bullying Velvet...or will he be the one bullied since he's got way more traits than any other Faunus? Hmm.. Ja Ne~! |
| Gamma-X chapter 2 . 6/21 I KNEW it was Ryuuko when i saw the character had the Scissors, next to having a red strand of hair! Also, you wrote "Rin" instead of "Ren" multiple times this chapter. And, you misquoted Ruby, what she actually said was "But you don't even know me..." You forgot the "But" and "me" part. Anyways, this seems fun, though I don't understand why you keep writing scenes that we already know and have already seen in the animated series in every one of your fics, since it's a bit annoying when nothing changed whatsoever between the fic and show usually. Though, I'd assume it's for people who haven't seen the series, or it just helps your flow with writing better to make them seem like actual official stories? But anyway... Ja Ne~! |
| Gamma-X chapter 1 . 6/21 "Well, its about a man with two souls, both fighting for control over the body." ...I just realized, was that book talking about Ozpin and was hidden spoiler? Also, why does Natsu have multiples Faunus traits? (Eyes, Fangs, scales, claws, tail, etc.) I thought they could only have 1 or 2? And what does NVAR stand for? Never? #MontyWasAGreatMan |
| Guest chapter 43 . 6/17 How did a scuffle between the Gods of Light and Darkness come up in Jinn’s vision in canon!? |
| Guest chapter 43 . 6/17 At least have Ironwood’s reply “Tear Cordovin a New One”! How come you only had the one guard at the base rather than the two identical stooges! |
| Guest chapter 43 . 6/17 Did Saphron and her wife adopt their child!? |
| gamma.hulk179 chapter 43 . 6/16 Yes Rwby tail does it again |
| Shadow Joestar chapter 43 . 6/14 KO awesome chapter, now the heroes will have to wait for Ironwood to answer the letter hoping he would give them a ride to Atlas but if not then they’ll have to think of something else with trouble along the way. |
| merendinoemiliano chapter 43 . 6/14 Mhh, dialouges could improve, add something to them. |
| Ultimatrix bearer chapter 42 . 5/10 Solid. KEEP BEING AWESOME! |
| Guest chapter 30 . 5/7 You are not the only one who thought esdeath when she talked about the weak and the strong |
