Reviews for The Washington-Potter Chronicles: Hurricane Athena Hits Hogwarts
Monster King chapter 18 . 9/11/2019
Great job
Guest chapter 2 . 3/31/2019
I wish I could ignore the obvious plot holes... But I can't how in Sam Houston's name did you miss the fact that she would have a tough time being in britain- a place that if her father is at WAR with, let alone the fact that she shouldn't be comfortable enough about modern society to understand what an internet connection is.

A few fixes would be appreciated.

I'm sorry if I sound angry.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2019
You have an interesting concept here.

Though the fact that she is immediately sent to the future, or what feels like it so far, is all that I have to criticize.

BTW, are you saying George Washington, was not only a wizard, was Lily's great great something odd grandfather, but also had knowledge of the future?

Are you even an American? I'd think George Washington would be more hands on about it to say the least.
Teaching young Athena the ways of Magic and war until her time is called for such as say the Tri- wizard tournament?

Maybe even have her go to ilvermorney... Hold on, it has come to my attention that this was made ten months before Fantastic Beats # 1 was released. So ill give you some leniancy on that.
AthinaNox chapter 9 . 3/3/2019
It’s quite an interesting idea, but there are some huge plot holes which make it rather difficult to read.
bauers374 chapter 13 . 2/23/2019
"Son I have a problem"...Grumbling about the nickname"
Yes you put it in
bauers374 chapter 11 . 2/23/2019
I just Imagine hamilton being all, "Oh you want a command too, welcome to the club"
bauers374 chapter 7 . 2/23/2019
35 points from Gryffindor? But Ron is in Slytherin In this TL
bauers374 chapter 4 . 2/23/2019
Nice but I really don't think most of the kids at hogwarts would know who George Washington is/was, Because the UK doesn't really care much about the Revolutionary war, and Given the Pureblood Ignorance of Muggle Culture, Then again, It was just one person saying "Washington, as in George Washington"
Wolfopard chapter 3 . 11/22/2018
Very nice, Athena feels a bit Mary Sue-ish, with her magic and wealth and her always being in control of the situation but except for that, it's great, I love it! She starts cursing people a bit quick though, maybe have Ron unknowingly insult them a bit before Athena makes him tap-dance, and Malfoy scorning their magical abilities or something, Athena could probably outwit him pretty quickly and not have to resort to spells.

I just realised, if they "took the lot" when buying candy, what about the other students?
Monster King chapter 17 . 2/28/2018
Great story I really liked it good job writing the story.
lisicarmela chapter 18 . 7/11/2017
me gusta tu historia besos
LittleFlowerchild chapter 1 . 12/23/2016
No Alexander Hamilton?
Hikari Nova chapter 1 . 12/8/2016
an interesting idea but VERY Deus Ex Machina with the time traveling owls
Rowena Ravenclaw chapter 9 . 11/24/2016
Okay I'm sorry if this sounds really rude but in the first chapter you made a mistake Draco does NOT have blue eyes quoted 'a piercing gray' from Harry Potter the Sorcerers stone I'm sorry if I'm bragging I just wanted to inform you and By the way are you a true Harry Potter fan don't mean to be rude just curiosity what I mean is though Have you watched the movies books ya know? MOTHER OF MERLIN this is long! I'm sorry if I wasted your time.
Penny is wise chapter 17 . 10/28/2016
Awesome story.
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