My man, I love this! Is there any chance that this fic will be updated? Cuz the suspense is killing me!

Storys okay, I liked the humor and stuff it was interesting. Didnt like how you did the same everyone does and takes cardin too far. Was hoping you would realize that velvet can fight for herself and is easily one of the strongest. The last chapter kinda pissed me off I didnt like it at all but overall its a decent fic.

RIP Yang, you never ever do that with a guy that has Jack Frost's power, especially how Ice/Winter/Snow represents when it's angry.

Hopefully, this gets updated.

do the pokemon thing

Holy shit Yang is so fucking unlikable in this fic please just kill her or something

please update

This is better than I expected hope you continue

update pleas

I swear, this needs its own reaction fic, so we can see Neo's reaction to the 'tiny' comments.

Im surprised he Didnt Encase her in a Fucking Glacier... Jaune in Atlas is going to be quite literally Unstoppable.

Couldnt Jaune Just Flash freeze Everything within a Radius, at that point, She wouldnt have been able to block, Now would she. Cant block 360 Degrees. and a Neo-Cicle Would have been HILARIOUS. Just, FREEZE, Blink Blink.

While Yang isn't tecnically in the wrong here, she's also kind of a bitch in how she went about it.

This really a great story. I hope that you haven't abandoned it. Its really a good story!

Here's how I would have the scene gone.

Jaune stared at her, his eyes cold, "Do you remember what I told you at initiation? I was being cordial with you for the sake of my friendship with Ruby... and now you are threatening to destroy that?"

A laugh escaped his mouth, "Go on ahead. Do it! Tell Ruby she can't hang out with me... but know that I won't hold myself back any longer. My friendship is the only thing that keeps you out of my cross hairs."

I’m almost glad the story was abandoned here. What a moronic angle to pursue.