When are you gonna update?

FYI, the pokemon name for mother is memma

So I read up to chapter 7 if you're going to use Fox kits design and idea then you're going to need to add some more storyline and background and a lot more excitement adventure and enthusiasm and you've got to add more dramatic effect strengthen mews character a little bit and fix up Ash also you turned him into a hybrid too fast leave him human for a little bit longer the whole thing just kind of need to rewrite but those are the main things you need to work on and fix all in all a good trial run

Ash SQUINTED at Brock

Wrong

Ash mimicked brock

what about charmander? hope you haven't replaced them.

I mean if it ever came down to it Ash and Mia could act like they are each other’s Pokémon in their Mew form like Mew could act like she belongs to Ash and Ash can act like he belongs to Mia

I can just imagine Pikachu’s mind completely breaking when Mew gave Ash a hug and then becoming even more broken when Ash turned into a shiny Mew

Giratina

...you know, it seems that's a conclusive thing in these sort of fics. The shiny legendaries are hybrid children of the actual legendaries. I wonder if it's the same for like, regular Pokemon too?(I mean like, a normal, non legendary Pokemon finds a orphan human and decides to keep them, and like ask a legendary, or pray to a legendary and a legendary hears them and transforms the kid into a Pokemon matching its new memma(though not hybrids, fully pokemon) I would explain regular shiny(though only if the only way a legendary could be shiny is if they were transformed that way by the parent)

I feel like I've gone on sort of a tangent, sorry bout that. Back to the fic, I always love reading fics like this, they are fun to read. This one in particular is really good so far.

good chap

please update soon

I hope you continue this! I can't wait for Damien's beat down by Mew though. And also, along those lines, when will, if at all, their traveling companions Misty and Brock figure out their Mew's?

Woes

What is the Alolan Vulpix doing with a Fairium Z Crystal?! Does it know a Fairy Type Move?.. i'm actually very puzzled about it

Shadow Pokémon?.. odd... though i'm still wondering if Girantina is involved...