Such a great story, I rarely enjoy reading, but this is brilliant, keep it up!

I've been reading some more and I'm really enjoying this, it grabs my attention with such strength, keep it up! :)

I've been reading more and I'm really enjoying this, not many things grab my attention with such strength!

I'm loving this story! I can easily get lost in it, I can see everything I'm reading! Great job!

I'm loving this so far! I've only read a couple chapters but its really captivating, keep up the great work!

The summery is misleading. I thought it was going to focus on Bones/Reaper, but he has only been in a couple of chapters and even then its only a few sentences.

Weren't their wrists behind their backs?
Ware did the cone come from?

Yay, John/Bones was in this chapter.

Five chapters in and were still on Jim's backstory? There is not a lot of being told about the "present", this isn't told like hes telling it or reliving it.
Its not bad, but i think their could be a better way to convey or present this information.
Keep up the good work.

Very intriguing, I read the story in one sitting, the world building is still impressive as your story incorporates both universe's AOS and the Reaper. The characterization are well done familiar yet different enough to suck the reader into the story. I can't until your next post!

Thanks for the update. I'm glad you went back to the present for a bit. I hope when McCoy does his reveal that it's epic!

Plz continue

Enjoyed. Dismayed.
awaiting a finish, or at least an acknowledgement that it wont be finished.

Not to be mean but it feels like you are concentrating too much on the back story and not enough on The Star Trek part. While I appreciate some back story to what happened to a Martian Kirk, this is a little bit much. It's a great story, but I hope you progress on The Star Trek timeline.

I'm so glad you're updated this story! The Lost Souls are getting more and more awesome with every chapter. And another Martian could still be alive, I can't wait to see what happens next, please update soon!